Miyuki's Odd Madcapped adventure!
Chapter 1:Miyuki's Dream thing!
By:Mecha Gir

Author's note:
Revised Edition!!!
Yup!If you see this that means it's a revised edition!
New title, same story line, new plot!!!! Now it's about
Miyuki making ZIM a tallest!!! what will happen? FIND OUT!!!
Review this or the original before July 25 02 and you'll
be on Mecha Gir's realy lame award thingy!!!!!!WITH 3 MESSAGES FROM OUR SPONSERS!!!




*setting:The Massive:
[Red]
PURPLE!!! YOU SHOULD HAVE NEVER PRESSSSED THE FEAR BUTTON!
[Purple]
HOW WAS I WAS SUPPOSED TO KNOW??!!!! IT HAD NO LABEL!!!
*We see Red and Purple running away from demons*
[Demon1]
BLABLABLA..CLICKYCLICKY!!!!!!
[RED]
hey... clicky pen noises... BIG TEETH YYYYYAHHHHH!!!!!!
*The pair run and run*
[Purple]
NOOOOO!!!hey look techno magazine..BIG RED EYS...YYYYYYAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!
*lots of demons surrond Red and Purple*
[Demon2]
HAHAHAGYFIKALDAS
*Miyuki appeaers*
[Red]
WHAT??? MIYUKI?? THAT'S AMAZING!!
[Purple]
this makes no sense..
[Miyuki]
With the power I have I call off the demons!
*Demons don't go and Spork appears*
[Spork]
And I call off the Doomies!
*Demons go away and Zim's blob thing comes and eats all of them*
NOT!
[Spork]
HEY ITS ZIM'S BLOB THING!!!
YYYYYYAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!
[Red]
NOOO!! WE'RE GONNA GET EATEN!
[Puple]
THATS HORRIBLE!!!!!!!!
[Miyuki]
NNNNNNOOOOOOOO!! NOT AGAIN!!
*all get eaten for real this time*
[Red]
this sux...
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HI PEOPLES!!!!!! I know it's suspenseful and all but just skip
this part if you don't wanna read my stuff!
HOW TO OBITAN IRKEN FUN DIP!!!
1. make container labeld 'irken fun dip' and put irken logo!
2. Buy a pack of wonka fun dip
2. put dip into container
3. get out pixystix and start eating...
MMMMM... snack!
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*setting:Inside Zim's blob:
[Red]
This sux
[Miyuki]
ha! what a tallest reunion!
[Spork]
Deja vu WHY!?
[Purple]
Hey it's ZIM!
[ZIM]
HI TALLEST!!! oh so you all got aten too...
*Tallest look all evil*
[ZIM]
AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
[Red]
DIE ZIM DIE!!!
[ZIM]
NNNNNNNOOOOOO!!!!!!!!
*Zim falls down in the digestive system.. and*
*Setting: Miyuki's bed*
[Miyuki]
OH MAN!!! WHAT A HORRIBLE DREAM....
Red and Purple- Tallest??? I won't allow it!I KNOW!!!
I'll make ZIM be the tallest!!! yeah that's a good Idea!
I'll make ZIM tall and comit sucide! YEAH!!!! GOOD PLAN!!!
TO BE CONTINUED....

Here's some Spoilers...
Spork will be in here ... somewhere... later in the fic!But Where??
Sneakyonfoota has major Role!But How??*
ZIM GET'S GIR EARLY!!! But why??
Red and Purple will get a major Charecter change!But when???
And a Guest person! But Who???

*sneakyonfoota picture can be found at wormbaby.com
somewhere..