So this is my story of how me and my best friend,Kali, ended up in theNaruto worlde. These characters are based of me and my actual friend.

She has This is my first story so I would appreciate any help on how to write better. This is the information on us. The characters are based off of me and my actual friend. Madison is 16 with curly, dark brown hair with blonde highlights. She has grayish eyes and tanned 's slightly taller than Kali. She's also slightly chubby.

Kali is 16 with curly, blonde hair that's almost white. She has dark brown eyes and tanned skin. She's only 5'4" and wears glasses. She's very fit from playing volleyball.

Both girls live in Cortland, New York. I don't own any characters or songs mentioned in this story other than Kali and Madison.

~Madison's P.O.V~

"Walking the streets with you and your worn out jeans, can't help thinking this is how it out to be. Laughing on the park bench thinking to myself, hey isn't this easy!" Kali and I harmonized as we walked down the street, heading to our favorite store. As we passed by a strange store full of antiques, I saw my reflection pass by. I stopped and stared at the strange mirror through the window. My curly, brown hair framed my face prefectly. My jeans were torn on the bottoms and matched perfectly with my tie-dye shirt. The outisde of the mirror was framed with small red jewels that burned with firey light. Kali's reflection stepped in next to mine. Her blonde hair came down past her shoulders and rested on her chest. Her black Lady Antebellum shirt was baggy around her frame.

"Let's go in!" I screamed. I grabbed Kali's arm and dragged her through the door.

I pushed the door open and a bell jingled above my head. There was no one at the counter and the store was silent.

"I don't think we should be in here." Kali stated nervously.

I just laughed and pulled her towards the mirror. Truthfully the store was kinda creepy. There was dust everywhere. In one of the corners I could make out the shape of a doll. I shivered. God i hate those things. Too many 'Chucky' movies. We were wandering the aisles when suddenly an idea popped into my head. I pushed Kali forward and ducked behind a shelf. As she got up i started to hum the Halloween theme song.

"Madison, knock it off, it's not funny!" She cried.

"Ok, ok." I stood up and laughed. I grabbed her hand again and pulled her through the aisles, towards the front of the store. "Come on, I saw this really cool mirror when we were outside."

As we reached the mirror i felt a strange tug in the back of my mind. The mirror was a bit shorter than Kali, but wider than the two of us standing together. The glass looked smooth so I leaned in to touch it. As soon as my fingers hit the glass they were met with a firey pain. I screamed as the glass rippled within the mirror and the pain in my hand spread throughout my entire body. There was a flash of white as i felt myself falling down, then everything went black.

~Kali's P.O.V.~

I heard Madison scream in pain. I went to reach for her, when suddenly a white light beamed from the mirror. I squinted my eyes at the sudden brightness. I felt the floor give out beneath me and I screamed. Finally the brightness dimmed and all I could see was black. I wasn't prepared when my hands finally met solid ground. I gave a smll gasp of surprise and looked around. I sighed in relief as i could just barely make out Madison laying next to me. I could tell she was out cold but she was still alive. I crawled over and started to shake her.

"Madison, come on, get up!" I pleaded.

She murmered and rolled over. I chuckled under my breath.I stood up and began to drag her. 'Maybe I can find us some shelter.' For the first time i looked up and realized that it was around noon. The sun was just barelt visable between the trees. Wait, WHAT? 'We're in a forest?' I sighed and continued to drag my friend through the bushes. Suddenly i felt something cold and sharp start to dig into my back. Then a voice low and cold sounded in my ear, "Who are you?" I froze in shock, knowing that voice.

DUN DUN DUN!

So who was the mystery person? So yeah this is my first time writing so I hope it wasn't to bad. R&R!