This story was began after I began to get aggravated at my other (and first) story. I have decided to rewrite some things and edit some chapters, so if you notice some discrepancies, it's most likely due to the fact that I haven't finished editing. I will edit each chapter one at a time. I hope it doesn't bother you too much and I hope you like the changes.
READER'S OPINIONS NEEDED!!!!!
Do you like 'yeah', 'un', or 'hm' better for Deidara's speech habit? I'm debating changing it, but I need your opinion.
Beginning of First Chapter
There were at least thirty men behind. Ami was strong, but if she took on that many at once, she would surely be captured. She formed a seal.Shadow clone jutsu! She sent the summoned shadow clones off in all directions. The amount of chakra behind her lessened. Only about twenty men now. Still not enough to escape without injury though. She sent back another shadow clone to kill a few. She kept running. After a moment the knowledge of the clone came back. It had only killed about six. Damn. Her chakra was running low. She had used most of it to kill that Uchiha bastard, Sasuke. He deserved it. For what he did to her he definitely deserved it.
"Damn it!" The men were getting closer. She pushed chakra into her feet. "Got to run faster!"
There was a town up ahead. If she could reach it and mask her chakra, she might be able to escape in the crowds of people.
She could see the light through the trees. "I'm going to make it!" She slowed down to save her chakra. She had almost made it to the clearing when a kunai hit her shoulder. Shit, they caught up. She slid to a stop, pulled out the kunai and took a defensive stance. She was immediately surrounded by ten ANBU. She was sure there were more but there wasn't any time to worry about them now.
She summoned two shadow clones and stood with their backs facing each other. Each pulled out a kunai. Then the ANBU spoke.
"Calm down. We can do this the easy way or the hard way. You are one of our village. If possible, we want to take you back unharmed."
"I'm not going to let you take me back!" All of her words were growled.
"Fine." The ANBU then nodded. They all charged. She forced her chakra into her specially made kunai. A spear of chakra formed at the ends. Due to her kekkei genkai she could solidify her chakra. She slashed away at the ANBU until none of them remained. Then, she collapsed of chakra depletion and her clones vanished. The ones used for decoys earlier had killed the ANBU following them. That was good at least. She looked herself over. While fighting those stupid ANBU she had obtained a large gash on her leg. She only had a little chakra left, but she couldn't travel with a busted leg. She sighed and began to heal her leg wound. This lack of chakra was making her dizzy. Finally she finished. She pulled herself over to a tree and leaned against it.
Even though there were a few ANBU left she was too tired to deal with them anyway. They would probably head back to the village anyway. Pure exhaustion crept over her body. She laid her head down against the tree. Her headband slipped off, loosened by her short battle. She looked at it. The leaf symbol stood proudly an it. She pulled out her kunai and slashed it. She then tied it back around her head. She tried to stand but the exhaustion caught up with her and she blacked out.
Akatsuki pov.
"Hey danna. Did you see that girl. She fought off all those Konoha shinobi. Yeah..."
"Yes I saw."
"She's kinda interesting... powerful..."
"Lets watch her for a while and see what she's made of. She might become useful."
"She's kinda hot yeah..."
"Gaki. Lets go." (a/n gaki means brat.)
Ami pov.
When Ami opened her eyes it was dark. She must have been out for at least a few hours. She carefully stood up. Luckily, her body recovered quickly, so a large amount of her chakra was back. She scanned the area. No sign of any Konoha shinobi. She finished her journey into the nearby town.
There were people everywhere. Some stared at her, but most ignored her. It didn't matter. Nothing mattered. She bought some food. Hopefully it would last until she reached the next town.
She exited at dawn. She needed to get going if she wanted to get out of fire country. She ran until the sun set. Thankfully, there was a lake nearby. The perfect place to rest. She had bought a blanket and other supplies while in town. She set a small fire and ate. Not much. She wanted to ration herself.
She sighed out loud. "It's all that Uchiha's fault. That stupid little..." She pushed him out of her mind. She didn't want to think about THAT now. Slowly she fell asleep.
She was woken up by a chakra presence nearby. Immediately awake she pulled a kunai out of her bag. Before her stood eight ANBU. One knocked the kunai from her hand while another punched her in the stomach. The wind knocked from her she fell to the ground. She cursed herself for letting her guard down.
Akatsuki pov.
"Let's see how she gets out of this one yeah..."
"For once I agree."
The two Akatsuki watched her as the ANBU attacked her. What she did surprised them. She took her chakra and formed it into a spear. Holding it in her hand, she began to slaughter her attackers. It was difficult being outnumbered, but she managed to bring them down.
"That was pretty amazing. yeah..." There was no response from his partner, so he continued. "Are we going to take her to leader-sama?"
"Yes. We'll contact him, ask him about it and if he agrees we'll bring her. I'm sure that strange ability of hers will interest him."
Ami pov.
She finished killing them. Had it been one-on-one, it would have been an easier kill, but since it wasn't, she had been forced to put effort into the fight. Sadly, she was now covered in blood. She undressed and jumped in the lake. It was really cold. She used a fire jutsu to heat up the water surrounding her slightly. She didn't do it too much however. She didn't want to hurt anything that lived there.
She was actually starting to enjoy herself when she sensed two people nearby. What's worse was that they were both high level shinobi. Slowly she waded to the shore and grabbed a kunai. Still half submerged, she threw it toward the hidden figures. She was sure that it wouldn't be effective, but at least it would force them to stop hiding. 'I hope.'
Immediately the figures jumped out of the bushes. Their faces were both hid by straw hats, that contained cloth hanging down. They looked like they were both male though. One was hunched over and they were both wearing black cloaks with red clouds on them. It seemed familiar. She immediately dove to the deeper section to hide her naked body. Though, as a kunoichi, she knew it shouldn't matter, she did it anyway. The taller one noticed this and laughed. She was sure that had she been anyone else, she would have been intimidated by the powerful shinobi, but the laugh only succeeded in pissing her off.
"What's so funny?" Ami growled at him. She formed a spear out of chakra and hurlded it at the pair. They doged it with ease, causing her to glare at them before speaking again. "What the hell do you want?"
"Well.. we want you yeah..."
Her eyes narrowed angrily. "What the hell for? If you think I'm going back to Konoha you got another thing coming."
"A missing nin? Perfect."
The tall one removed his hat. He was blond with feminine features. The hair on one side of his face covered his eye, reminding her of the irritating blond kunoichi from the leaf. She almost found it cute on the male. Almost.
"We want you to come with us to the Akatsuki."
Akatsuki. That's why they were so familiar. They were part of the group that tried to kidnap that Naruto kid from the village. A while back, Ami had looked through files in other countries about rogue shinobi as a part of special training. After doing research she had learned about the members. It was surprising how some of the areas she travelled, knew even more than Konoha about their enemies. This looked to be Sasori of the red sands from Sunagakure and Deidara from Iwagakure. She remembered seeing a file on them when she had been allowed into a small village near Amegakure. Why it was there, she had no idea, but to her disappointment, the information was classified, and to tell it to anyone else would have caused severe conflict. At the time, she thought it wouldn't matter, believing that the shinobi in the files were deceased, but now, she realized that they were indeed alive. She just wished she had studied more of the files.
She pondered their words for a moment. Despite being criminals, she was sure that they were being truthful. Thinking about it, she knew that it was pointless to decline. "Akatsuki, huh? I'm on the run from my village, killed allied ninja, am more than likely going to kill more. Join the Akatsuki? Why the hell not?" Her voice was bitter, and she diverted her eyes from them. The fact that she had to leave her village in the first place wasn't something she really enjoyed talking about.
"Then its settled." Sasori spoke. They stood waiting, causing her eyes to return to them with mild irritation, already having pushed her prior thoughts from her mind.
"Can you at least turn around?"
"Why?"
"Because I'm not dressed you ass." She threw a a shard-like piece of chakra at them. They dodged, but after a moment, listened and turned aroud. Ami ran out of the water and, as quickly as possible, got dressed. As she did so she could hear them whispering.
"Told you she was hot danna, yeah..." The blond said, his tone telling her there was a smirk on his face without her even needing to see it.
"Is it possible for you to act mature."
Ami's anger sparked at Deidara's sentence. She appeared behind him in an instant and knocked him on the head. It wasn't anywhere near hard enough to cause damage, but definitely hard enough to show her displeasure. He fell to the ground.
"What the hell was that for!?" He looked at her, partially with a glare, but partially with a look of innocence. He managed to jump to his feet, glaring at her.
"For being perverted!"
"It was a compliment! I said you were hot! I didn't know that you would throw a damned fit!"
She would have hit him again but Sasori intervened. "Enough!"
She looked away, trying not to glare at them. When Sasori looked away as well, she made to hit Deidara again, a smirk on her face. This time though, she was only joking. He apparently didn't realize this as he raised his hands up in self defense. When he did, she was able to see mouths on his hands. She let out a small laugh.
His kekkei genkai looked amusing, but she wasn't about to say that out loud. After all, she didn't want to anger her possible new allies. They began to walk, and she followed, leaving her old life behind to begin a new one.
End of First Chapter.
(a/n I suck at creating jutsu.)
I guess that's it for now.
Deidara- Why did you make me such a pervert yeah...
Me- I dunno. Cuz I felt like it.
Dei- bitch...
Me- Shut the hell up!! Otherwise I'll have Ami murder your ass. Got it?
Dei-...
me- Good. Reviews make me happy. Bye Bye!
