This is my first fan fic so please go easy on me.Any constructive criticism would be great as it is definatly not on the rest of your levels.
Characters:Hmm Im not saying who the mean character is just yet even though i'm sure you can guess.Most of the recent cast are in it plus a few new ones like Amanda.
Setting:Sun Hill but three or four years in the future
I have not kept strictly to the bill's script because franklyI didn't want to!
Even though the front of the station had been refurbished she could still vividly remember it. But this was three years since she was last here and she was hoping that the second time around it would be so much easier. Before it was as if a huge barrier had been put in front of her and she could not see what was best instead of looking she leaped and hoped that something would catch her. But it never did. She fell into a dark, deep hole but gradually she was climbing up out of it and rebuilding for life from scratch. Now she had a life, someone to live for and she loved every minute of it. Walking into the front office she could see that it had changed, so had the person managing it they were not the short liverpudlian she expected to see, in fact they were the complete opposite. Throwing a smile she swiped her card and walked through the fireproof door, unsure if the lockers were in the same place she gazed around the corridors until she bumped into middle aged PC.
"Hi im new I don't suppose you could show me where the lockers are could you?" She asked
"Yeah sure there down here, so have you been a copper long?" She replied,
"Yes, I used to work here a few years ago but I left when I had my son" She beamed, just the thought of him made her feel so proud, he was everything to her.
"Its just here" she said as she gestured to a door marked 'Ladies Locker Rooms'.
The younger woman thanked her as she blushed at her stupidity; they were situated in the exact same location as before!
As she walked in scanning the lockers for no. 13 she heard laughing and giggling, she dearly wanted to look up but she was late as it was and she had to find her locker.
Opening the locker door she dropped some items out of her bag, peering round was a brown haired woman a bit shorter than herself, bending down to pick the items up she looked at a photo it was of a young boy no older than three.
Handing her back her possessions she introduced herself the new officer,
"Hi my names Amanda, cute child is he yours?" she asked,
"Yeah he has just turned three" the blonde headed woman replied,
"I'd love kids but my boyfriend isn't really that kind of guy" she said quietly,
The other woman smiled at her while getting ready, she really had to get on and having a deep and meaningful conversation with someone she barely knew was not high on her lists of things to do. By now her friends had gone into the briefing room and Amanda was adamant on telling her problems to this stranger.
Great just what I had planned!………………………