Authors Note: this is now my second story i will be updating this as much as i can and i feel like this is a really good story so please i count on reviews. this story is like both River and the Doctor are older but amy and Rory never died in TATM.
The tardis shook violently as the passengers hung on to the railing and with one more shake sending them flying to the floor.
"Sometimes i wonder if i will ever get use to being thrown across the floor i mean i have enough bruises to connect the dots do you think you could maybe learn how to fly the tardis more calmly like i don't know River. Speaking of witch is that who were going to see its ben ages" said a slightly grumpy and bruising Amy. moving over to help Rory who was looking quite annoyed.
"OH pond whats the fun in time travel if you don't have few bruises and bumps along the way eh" the doctor said looking at the screen.
We are going to see your daughter thought you might be missing her or she you" his eyes never leaving the screen. Amy noticing this went over to him arms crossed only catching a glimpse of what was on the screen but not quite making out what it was.
"What was that". Amy said getting the feeling that he was hiding something.
"Nothing he said making his way to the door "just silly boring stuff now lets go see your daughter" he said flashing a grin at them as he opened the door coming face to face with river who had all the color drained from her face replaced with green.
"Hello their doctor song how goes the day" he said not noticing well at least acting as if he didn't notice her sick appearance but Rory being the nurse noticed and said
"River are you ok you look a bit green" stepping closer to her putting his hand on her forehead. "you don't have a fever" he said looking confused. The doctor was starting to get worried but before he could say anything she ran to the nearest bathroom Amy and Rory following behind. the doctor could hear her throwing up hearing her mutter.
"Im fine" she said her hand going to wrap around her slim stomatch.
"No your not fine River you need to rest" Amy said in a motherly voice.
" I said I am fine! she said in harsh voice then qickly apoligizing noticing the harsh voice she held with her mother who was only concerned. they made their way back to the control room finding the doctor fiddling with the screen as making this his 4th body scan on river this week it was the same thing again with Amy someone has taken River. he looked at the screen feeling very guilty but determined he could see the yellow glow in her abdomen swimming around the energy of their unborn child was showing early. witch could only mean whoever got her was speeding up the the birth of the baby and this was not the real river then where was she and who with. "river oh river my love i will find you wherever and whenever you are im coming for you im commin
Ok so thats chapter one please review and chapter 2 should be up soon thanks!