Prologue – A Silent Tear
"Three years," the man whispered to himself. Merely a small speck of dust in time, yet for Kaoru it felt like centuries. A great deal had changed since that one seemingly uneventful day, the day Hikaru began to forget him.
He sat in front of his old school, starring at the familiar pathways and uniforms. Very few faces looked familiar, but one stood out from all the rest...
...the face he saw in the mirror every morning.
His twin, Hikaru, laughing while talking to various unknown faces. Even if Kaoru had known the students speaking with his brother he would not have recognized them, because his eyes were filled with only the 'perfect' image of his brother.
As Kaoru sat in his extravagant limo with handcrafted leather seats from Italy he felt no relaxation or comfort that he normally felt. Instead he gazed at the pure cloudless blue sky, while his lips murmured without sound, "why does it hurt so much."
As Kaoru left the car a single tear leaked from an impossible deep blue, glassy eye.
So what do you think? This is my first fanfiction, and only the prologue, so I need to know if it good enough to continue.