Juz this thought swirling in my mind when it was windy n drizzling this
morning...
*Get on with it!* It's a POV of Kurama-sama & Hiei-same, from their lil' minion. E laz time I didn't specify, so some ppleZ said it looked weird. SO. Here it is! Version 2.0.
Kurama's POV
This tender wind glazes past my skin
Sending a spine-tingling whisper through me
Such similarity to your icy, cool,
yet, at that the same time,
fiery and heated touch...
Ah/Oh yes, the gift of sight
To take in all these breathtaking sights
The lush green meadows
The rebellious ocean
The soothing yet restless forests
Of course, all these gorgeous scenery pales in comparison to you.
To drown in the mysterious and sorrowful pools of emerald
The seemingly icy exterior
Under which a fire of passion burns steadfastly
Like a seemingly dormant volcano
Under which boiling lava threatens to seep/burst through and consume your desires
Hiei's POV The calm, soothing aura that only belongs to you,
Only you can exude.
Yet, at the same time, it speaks of the untamed abandonment/abundance that believe your unreined spirit, wild and free.
Your eyes, the window to your soul
When fallen upon me
Just like the wind...
Feel this shudder
Feel this unknown force swallow me in its dark, powerful oblivion.
WIND...
*Minna-san, can u juz give me a comment on this? i dun mind if it's a flame or a compliment, just want a response! ThanX~*! *MuakZ* *Puppy Eyes shining with hope*
I KNOW. Hiei-sama's part wuz kinda short. Hiei: Did I even KNOW how to sound poetic?!??!! !@#$% C.S.: ::SwEaTdRoP:: (^.~") T.T
*Get on with it!* It's a POV of Kurama-sama & Hiei-same, from their lil' minion. E laz time I didn't specify, so some ppleZ said it looked weird. SO. Here it is! Version 2.0.
Kurama's POV
This tender wind glazes past my skin
Sending a spine-tingling whisper through me
Such similarity to your icy, cool,
yet, at that the same time,
fiery and heated touch...
Ah/Oh yes, the gift of sight
To take in all these breathtaking sights
The lush green meadows
The rebellious ocean
The soothing yet restless forests
Of course, all these gorgeous scenery pales in comparison to you.
To drown in the mysterious and sorrowful pools of emerald
The seemingly icy exterior
Under which a fire of passion burns steadfastly
Like a seemingly dormant volcano
Under which boiling lava threatens to seep/burst through and consume your desires
Hiei's POV The calm, soothing aura that only belongs to you,
Only you can exude.
Yet, at the same time, it speaks of the untamed abandonment/abundance that believe your unreined spirit, wild and free.
Your eyes, the window to your soul
When fallen upon me
Just like the wind...
Feel this shudder
Feel this unknown force swallow me in its dark, powerful oblivion.
WIND...
*Minna-san, can u juz give me a comment on this? i dun mind if it's a flame or a compliment, just want a response! ThanX~*! *MuakZ* *Puppy Eyes shining with hope*
I KNOW. Hiei-sama's part wuz kinda short. Hiei: Did I even KNOW how to sound poetic?!??!! !@#$% C.S.: ::SwEaTdRoP:: (^.~") T.T