SO I'VE CHANGED A LOT SINCE I FIRST POSTED THIS AND I WANTED TO FIX IT TO MY LIKING. I HOPE YOU DON'T MIND BUT THERE ARE SO MANY SPELLING AND GRAMMAR MISTAKES THAT I CAN'T HANDLE IT...I'M OCD. IF YOU COULDN'T TELL.
I OWN NOTHING TO DO WITH THE PRODUCTION OF NARUTO.
CHAPTER ONE-MY CONFESSION
Hello, I'm Hinata Hyuuga-and yes the famous Hyuugas-known for their strength and fighting skills..let's just say it was a miracle I was born a Hyuuga, if you catch my drift. I am a senior at Konaha High and I'm on my way to starbucks-now I know what you're thinking,'Oh Starbucks YUUUUSSSS!'-NO, my friends, because I'm about to do something that could potentially ruin the rest of my life. You see it all started in my freshman year of highschool, I happen to have met the boy of my dreams.
FLASHBACK:
I was walking down the hall trying not to get stepped on. I was a petite (itty bitty) freshman and all of a sudden this girl with ugly red hair pushed me on the ground. Owwie.
''Looks like we got some fresh meat girls,'' The red head smirked at me.
''What are you gonna do to her, Karin?'' A girl with purple hair asked with a smirk on her face as well. What the hell is with this school?
''Hmm. I don't know. How about we cut all this ugly blue hair off?''
You're hair is ugly BITCH!
Big red grabbed me by my hair and her 'friends' held me down.
They were just about to cut my hair when my knight in-bright orange? What kind of knight wears bright orange? Oh well. He's still cute.
''Leave her alone Karin! She hasn't done anything to you,'' He yelled out.
Karin (apparently her name was) and her 'friends' ran away.
''T-Thank you so much. I definately owe you one,'' I smiled shyly and blushed a little.
Can you blame me? This guy is seriously hot. Even if he does smell like...spicy chicken ramen? Oh well. I like spicy chicken ramen. We can look past that. It's all good.
''No problem. A girl as cute as you doesn't owe me a thing,'' He flashed me a foxy grin and winked at me. I blushed even harder.
Did he really just call me cute? Hot dam!-but of course the magic that is love was interrupted. F my life.
''Come on, dobe,'' A guy with midnight blue spikey hair commanded.
F you guy with sexy hair. You ruined the moment. And now your on my list. In the top ten. Jerk.
''I got to go. By the way I'm Naruto Uzumaki,'' He grinned and ran off.
I yelled after him. "I'm Hinata Hyuuga!''
''See you around Hina-chan!'' He yelled back.
FLASHBACK OVER!
And unfortunately after that I didn't see him around school much except at lunch and I was too shy to say anything. So now here I am heading to Starbucks to confess my love. I found out Naruto goes there every Tuesday and Thursday right after baseball practice. Eep! I'm here. Wish me luck.
God this is like a bad Lifetime channel movie.
I found him sitting with his friends from the first day I met him and I walked right up. Be cool and confident, Hinata. You can totally do this. You're a Hyuuga. Act like it. He noticed the silence from his friends and looked up at me.
OhMyGod. I can't do this! I'm a loser, I'm totally NOT confident, and I can't act like a Hyuuga! No. I MUST do this!
''H-Hi Naru-to-kun,'' I stuttered. Crap. What kind of Hyuuga stutters? This one apparently.
''Are you alright? Your face is all red,'' He pointed out with concern.
Wow. I'm in love with an idiot. Even his friends knew. My friends knew! Good lord even my DAD knew! What is wrong with this kid?
''Yeah. I'm fine but I do have something to say to you,'' I said rather confidently. Score!
''What is it Hina-chan?'' He asked.
''I-I-I lo-loo,'' Grrr. Come on now! Help me out here universe!
''I loove...yooouuuu-your skiing,'' I squeaked out. OhMyGod.
What the hell. Does Naru-chan even ski? I certainly have never seen it so how on earth could I love it? Jesus Smejus.
"Um. Thanks Hinata-chan..?'' He replied uncertainly. Double crap.
''No. That's not what I meant to say! Um. What I was trying to say was, I love..yooouuu-your skipping.'' GAH!
This sucks complete ass! I've never seen Naruto-kun skip either! Son of a biscuit.
''Um. Hina-chan I have to go but I'll talk to you later. Bye now,'' He paid his check and headed out the door. This isn't happening.
I grabbed his arm. He looked back at me curiously.
''I'm so sorry, Naru-kun! I have been planning all day how I was gonna say that I love you and what you could possibly say and nothing is going as I planned!'' I finished, not even noticing that I had told him.
His eyes widened.
''You love me?'' He asked.
Triple crap. When did I say that? I nodded shyly and closed my eyes so I wouldn't see the rejection in his eyes.
''I love you too Hina-chan,'' He smiled though I couldn't tell.
ErMaGord. Did he just say he loves me too? Did you hear that too? Really? Well hot damn!
I opened my eyes.
''Really?'' I questioned.
''Absolutely. I think your an amazing girl Hina-chan,'' He smiled. Well I can't really blame him. Can you? I'm the bomb diggity! Woop Woop Go me!
''I always thought you were just too good for me,'' He blushed. He blushed for me! For little ol' me!
I grabbed his hand, my heart full of confidence, and I slowly pulled my body up and kissed him.
My first kiss! And he kissed me back! Praise Tha Lord!
This is THE best day of my life! I feel like a woman now! Now I just have to tell my daddy..
Ah shit.
TA-DA! WHAT DID YOU THINK? I THINK IT'S A LOT BETTER THAN BEFORE. REVIEWS PEOPLE, REVIEWS.
xXBrown-Eyed-CutieXx
