Hey everyone! I'm writing my second story now, which is actually a rewrite of my first story Flames of Ice. I didn't like how the beginning was and how I was missing some important details that I forgot to add in it. So, I'm just going to rewrite the whole story. However, don't worry! I will still be writing the original version of the story. I have too many ideas that I want to write down before I forget them. The rewrite will just be of past chapters with maybe some new chapters that aren't in the first version. Sorry if you rather not have to read it. It's just my style of writing changed from how I first wrote and other stuff. And the fact that in my view I think I made them Mary and John Sue or something. Sorry about that. I'm changing that in this version.

So, enough babble from me! I present you with the new and revised version of Flames of Ice in this story. Icefire. Read and Review Please! Light flames and criticism are appreciated with also your thoughts on the story. At the end of this chapter will be the Omake Theater. Oh, and don't forget to vote in my poll!

Well, enjoy and review!

Before you begin...

Note: When using Mandarin Chinese or any other words in another language, the words in English will be in (here). {Also note that I may write the wrong word. I am not fluent in Chinese or those other languages!} If you do know the correct one, please tell me. I don't want it to stay wrong forever.

Second Note: This story takes place somewhere in spring with the Winter War at the end of that year. And the shinigamis that came to Karakura Town are already there but the Espada and/or Arrancar hasn't attacked yet. Sorry, that's how I want the story to start since it's happening similar like that in the first version. And before I forget, it should mostly follow the manga version of the story. I might add some of the anime but I'm still unsure. There might be some more changes but I'm unsure for now.

Disclaimer: I do not own Bleach or any of its characters except my version of the plot and characters.

-o-o- Chapter 1 -o-o-

A New Kind of Trouble

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'Thoughts'

"Speaking"

"Are we there yet?" a girl asked out loud while looking out the window. She was currently sitting in an airplane and looking out into the vast blue sky with her emerald green eyes. Honey brown mid-back length hair rested on her back in twin pigtails. Her outfit consisted of a simple purple shirt and a white vest over a pair of blue jeans and sandals. From her height it seemed that she was about sixteen-years-old.

"NO. Now SHUT UP!" the boy next to her growled, pulsing a vein. He looked exactly like the girl next to him except his hair was shorter than hers and his eyes were a deeper shade of green. The clothes he had on were a pair of jeans and a brown t-shirt with sneakers. Both his hands that were on the armrest next to his chair were clutching them so hard that it seemed any harder that they would break under the pressure he was exerting on it.

Suddenly two arms appeared behind them from the seat behind the two of them. Those very arms then whacked both the boy and girl on the head hard enough that they shouted out in pain. Both of the two teens that were whacked turned around their seat and looked to see who had done that to them.

"Kaida! Don't do that!" the girl whined, rubbing her sore head. The boy nodded in agreement while also rubbing his throbbing head. Both had identical glares to the girl that did it to them.

Kaida just smirked at them. "Then don't be so stupid, bakas." Kaida was about an inch shorter than those and had nothing else in comparison in them, expect being about the same age as them. Her eyes were instead a mix of bright orange and pale yellow that if in the correct light they would probably look like two mini sunsets. Black shoulder length hair curled just at the shoulders that had streaks of gold in them, clearly shouting highlights to those that looked at her. All she had on were a pair of jeans, sneakers, and a white tank top underneath a red jacket.

The two called bakas twitched and pulsed a vein. Their expressions clearly showed that they hated being called bakas. Who didn't? Baka meant idiot in the Japanese language. And that showed that no one wanted to be called an idiot, no matter what language.

"I'm not a baka! Mitsuki is!" the boy argued back, pointing to the girl next to him. The girl called Mitsuki pulsed another vein before whacking him on the head.

"KIYO! YOU'RE THE BAKA!" Mitsuki retorted back, her hand above his head, as if threatening him to say it again. Kiyo just twitched at her before resisting the urge to hit her on the head again. Kaida just sweat dropped at the scene in front of her.

Kaida then looked at the girl sitting next to her. "What do you think, Kira? Think they're both bakas?"

Kira looked away from her book and back at her. She was smaller than her and the other two in front of them. In fact, she looked only about thirteen-years-old. Her hair was the same shade of black as Kaida; however it ran all the way down to her waist. Plus it was its natural color; no highlights anywhere in it. And that was with it tied up. On her were a black sweater, a black pair of jeans instead of the blue the others wore, and sneakers. Two different eye colors, one a sapphire blue and the other a teal green, blinked right back at her.

"Hai." Kira answered before looking back at her book. Kaida just sighed at her when the girl she just asked pulled out an IPod and began listening to it. Loud. Amazing she hadn't gone deaf yet at that very moment by how loud it was playing.

"KIRA!" Mitsuki pouted, turning her head away from Kiyo and towards Kira. "I'm not a baka! Right?!" her green eyes pleaded with Kira. The being pleaded at girl didn't even look up from her book at the one who was pouting. All she did was lift her book up and whacked Mitsuki on the head. The other two snickered in laughter as the girl she hit began shouting and crying out in pain again.

"OW!!! WHY DOES EVERYONE ALWAYS HIT ME?!?" Mitsuki screamed, rubbing her throbbing head once again. The three that she was referring to looked away and tried to look busy when some nearby passengers on the same flight began looking back at them. All of them sweat dropped or looked in confusion as they saw Mitsuki screaming and shouting about why everyone hits her.

"Miss..." one of flight attendants said, approaching her. She was looked quite old and had on a mean expression on her face. The four she was walking towards her didn't know if that was from Mitsuki shouting out for the last ten minutes or if that old lady was always had that sour expression on her face.

"Yeah?" Mitsuki asked, settling back down in her seat. However, she somehow missed the seat and was sent sprawling towards the ground. She laid in an awkward position, squished between her seat and the one in front of her, as Kaida and Kiyo began bursting a gut out in laughter. Kira just rolled her eyes before continuing reading her book. The flight attendant didn't find it funny at all. It instead looked like she was pissed at them instead. Well, more than when she was just walking towards them.

"MISS." three pairs of eyes then looked back at the flight attendant that was standing in the aisle next to them. She was trying to prevent herself from twitching but it seemed to have failed since all of them could see her twitching as clear as daylight. "PLEASE refrain from any more DISTRACTIONS while on the rest of this flight. SOME PEOPLE prefer that you keep yourself QUIET." the flight attendant continued, empathizing on some of the words. It just proved that she hated them and wished she could chuck them out the plane without getting sued.

"Let me think..." Mitsuki answered, tapping her head as if proving she was. "Since you were SO mean in asking that, I'm going to say...NO!" The flight attendant pulsed a vein and twitched, both hands shaking as if resisting the urge to choke the crazy girl so that she could get some peace for herself and go back to doing whatever she wanted.

"You REALLY should." the flight attendant then added, the grinding of her teeth clearly being heard. "Not EVERYONE WANTS to be DISTURBED on this flight to JAPAN." Mitsuki just shrugged.

"So? Have them file a complaint against the company. It's probably from the terrible flight attendants they have on board here." Mitsuki explained. Kiyo and Kaida choked back on their laughter as they watched to see what the flight attendant would do. That very same flight attendant had her mouth wide open and her eyes bulging that she looked like a gaping fish. Her face was coated in a deep shade of red and steam could be seen coming out of her ears. Nearby passengers were snickering silently too; none of them like that flight attendant very much.

"Why...you...I..." the flight attendant stuttered, pointing and glaring at Mitsuki. The girl just smiled innocently at her before gesturing towards the back of the plane where the other flight attendants that hated that flight attendant were silently cheering for joy at her being showed up by a teenage girl.

"You better get back there; no one wants you here." Mitsuki then added to the still steaming flight attendant. The one she talked to glared coldly at her before stomping back to where her co-workers were. Once she passed the curtain that led to the next class of seats everybody in the previous class shouted out in cheers. They were happy that the she-devil evil lazy flight attendant was gone.

"Nice job!" Kiyo congratulated, slapping his hand with Mitsuki in a high five. Mitsuki just smiled brightly before looking back behind her at Kaida and Kira. Kaida raised an eyebrow at her as she saw Mitsuki staring straight at her, her bottom lip stuck out and eyes wide into the poppy dog eyes look.

"Don't I get candy for making her go away?" Mitsuki asked, her poppy dog eyes widening even more. Kaida rolled her eyes at her, clearly not affected by it. But it did make her twitched for some reason.

"Fine. BUT only ONE candy bar!" Kaida said, grabbing her carry-on bag from beneath her seat. Mitsuki cheered and looked on hungrily as Kaida then opened her bag and pulled out a chocolate bar. But before she could even close her bag both it and the candy bar was swiped out of her hands. The girl with her things swiped blinked before looking over the seat to where Mitsuki and Kiyo were. The one who swiped her stuff was now stuffing their face with chocolate bars and other treats that were hidden in the bag. She twitched and pulsed a vein.

"Yummy!" Mitsuki stated, not noticing Kaida behind her. She just stuffed another candy bar into her mouth before going to open another one up. Kiyo was also eating some himself, swiping some when Mitsuki wasn't looking. But that was only about six.

"KIYO!!! THAT'S MINE!" Mitsuki screeched, making a grab for the candy bars that he stole from her that she stole from Kaida. He just backed away from her and continued eating.

"No way! You already ate like twenty of those!" Kiyo shouted back, taking another bite out of the chocolate bar. Mitsuki just growled at him before making another grab at the candy.

"YOU'RE MY OLDER BROTHER!!! YOU SHOULD BE NICER TO ME!!!" Mitsuki retorted, once again missing her brother. Kiyo just rolled his eyes at her before finishing his sixth chocolate bar.

"By just ten minutes! We may be twins and me being older than you but doesn't mean I have to always give you what you want!" Kiyo snapped back, ducking as Mitsuki tried to grab his face just seconds before he ducked.

"BUT IT'S MY CANDY!!!" Mitsuki cried, stomping her foot. Kiyo just sweat dropped at her before opening his seventh candy bar. But before he could get a bite out of it and before his younger sister was going to start tackling him once again Kaida whacked them both of the heads. Multiple times.

"NO YOU BAKA HEADS!!! THAT'S THE CANDY I CONFISCATED FROM YOU BEFORE WE GOT ON THIS FLIGHT TO JAPAN!!!" Kaida thundered, still whacking the twins. Being whacked twins just cried and shouted out in pain and complained that it was the others fault as they kept getting whacked. The rest of the plane sweat dropped since they couldn't anime fall while on a plane. Kira just rolled her eyes at the three of them and went on reading as if she didn't know them.

It was going to a long flight to Japan.

About five hours later...

"Finally! We're here!" Mitsuki cried out, dashing off the plane. Her other companions sweat dropped at her before following her off the plane as well. They then all did an anime fall when Mitsuki started barking at random people like a dog. The scared and freaked out people just ran away with what- or whoever they were with, not wanting to be near the crazy probably mental girl. After all, who barks like a dog after just getting off a plane?!

"...I wish I was an only child." Kiyo grumbled, trailing after his sister with the other two behind him. Kaida nodded her head in agreement in his wish.

"So do I."

"HEY!!!" Mitsuki shouted back at them, clearly hearing what they said. They just sweat dropped when Mitsuki ran into a pole when she was looking back at them. Apparently she wasn't paying attention to where she was going. There's the scattered brain of her acting.

"...anyone want to get our stuff and leave as quickly as possible?" Kaida deadpanned after a few seconds of silence when Mitsuki ran into another pole. Kiyo and Kira nodded.

"Let's do that before we have to go pay for something Mitsuki breaks again." Kiyo added when his sister then ran into the wall. They then all did another anime fall when she began shouting at the wall for not looking out for where it was going. Seriously, HOW THE HELL DO YOU YELL AT A WALL?! IT'S AN INANIMATE OBJECT!!!

"STUPID WALL!!! WATCH WHERE YOU'RE GOING!!!"

After about an hour of finding their luggage, one for all of them expect for Mitsuki who had four bags, they got two taxi's and then headed to their new home. It was nighttime, around ten o'clock to be exact, when they were riding in the taxi. The nighttime sky acted as a black backdrop with brightly colored buildings standing out in front of them. People that were out late walked up and down streets, enjoying the cloudless spring night. Everyone expect for the taxi driver driving Mitsuki and Kiyo, that is.

The poor guy who got stuck with them had to stuff four bags into the back of his cab; all of them Mitsuki's. Kiyo's one bag of stuff had to go along with Kaida's and Kira's stuff since there was no more room in there. After about twelve minutes of stuffing and pounding the luggage in, he then began driving them towards their new home, an apartment complex somewhere in Karakura Town. And during those two hours of driving the guy had to deal with the two twins screaming at each other in seeing who was more of an idiot: Kiyo or Mitsuki.

When both taxis pulled up to the apartment complex, one was calm and happy since his passengers didn't yell and hardly talked while the other one was ready to tie himself up with dynamite and jump off a cliff. Guess which driver had which passengers? The guy who had Mitsuki and Kiyo literally kicked them out of his cab before jumping out and throwing their stuff on top of them. Accepting the money from Kaida, the guy then fled the area so fast that all that was left of him was a trail of dust. His companion blinked at how fast he left the area before following after him after getting paid and getting their stuff out of the back.

Kaida shook her head once her taxi driver left, however this time at a legal speed compared to the other one. Looking back at the twins still lying on the ground with swirls in their eyes and their luggage on them, she raised an eyebrow at them. "What the hell did you guys do now to the poor guy? He looked like he wanted to kill himself!"

Kiyo and Mitsuki looked up at her before at their other sibling. They then quickly pushed their stuff off of them before jumping up and pointing to the younger/older sibling.

"IT'S HER/HIS FAULT!"

Kaida twitched and pulsed a vein while Kira just shook her head. It was amazing that she could still hear what they were saying despite having her headphones in her ears on loud. However it was a miracle that she hadn't gone deaf yet from listening to music that loud.

"WILL YA TWO BEHAVE FOR ONCE IN YA TWO'S MISERABLE LIVES?!" Kaida thundered at them. "I WANT TO GET SOME SLEEP BEFORE GETTING READY FOR SCHOOL IN THE MORNING!!!"

The twins cowered at her loud voice before registering what she said. Wait...school in the morning? Both twins blinked at her before understanding what she had said/yelled at them.

"WHAT THE HELL?! WE HAVE SCHOOL THAT EARLY?!" they exploded back. Kaida nodded angrily at them before pointing to the second floor of the apartment complex.

"GET YA TWO BUTTS UP THERE!!! SCHOOL STARTS IN ABOUT SEVEN HOURS!!!"

"YES MA'AM!" Mitsuki and Kiyo saluted back. Pushing each other out of the way, they then began grabbing their stuff before running towards the apartment they would be staying at. Well...Kiyo was running. Mitsuki was...dragging her luggage behind her. She cursed under her breath on why the hell she was going so slow.

Kaida just shook her head before looking at Kira. She just blinked at her before doing the same as the twins. But at a walking pace. The older girl just sighed and began following he after the other two. Both the two other teens were stilling racing up the stairs towards the second floor apartment, creating so much noise that their new neighbors began turning on their lights and popping their heads out the door to see what was going on.

"Err...nothing going on right now. Go back to sleep." Kaida explained as she and Kira walked past each door that was opened...which was all of them. She sweat dropped as they all glance at them suspiciously before shrugging and slamming the door shut behind them. It was late and they wanted sleep.

By the time the two sane ones reached their apartment, only one door was left opened. And that one was their next door neighbors. They were staring and sweat dropping at the scene in front of them. All of them in their sleep ware since it was nighttime. And that very scene was Mitsuki and Kiyo going straight into another yell fest and this time whacking each other with rubber chickens they had pulled out of nowhere.

"Oh boy..." Kaida groaned, slapping her forehead. There was never any peace with theses two. Removing her hand from her forehead, she then noticed the three people that she didn't know that was standing in the doorway of the apartment next to them. She sweat dropped and cursed silently in her head that the twins were leaving such a horrible impression on all their neighbors.

The three people that were standing there were two women and a guy. The first was a girl was a teenage girl that had long light orange hair with bangs that was maybe the same height as the twins. Both of her bangs were supported up by two hairpins that were shaped as two small six petal flowers. Her eyes were a brown color that had a similar color of the twins' hair color. Her um...chest...was quite large too.

The other woman seemed to older than the other two, about a college student or something since she was a bit taller than all of them there. She had hazel-blond hair and pale blue eyes that were drowsy with sleep. And she also had a rather large...um...chest...too. However she didn't seem big on the fact of trying to conceal them from the four of them and her two roommates.

The third and final one was a boy that looked no older than about Kira's age. His eyes matched those of the said girl's teal green eyes and seemed to have the exact same boredom in this as she had. But his hair was another story. It was spiky and stuck up all over the place and was colored a silver-white color. If any of them were paying attention, some -cough- Mitsuki -cough- would say he probably looked like an old guy in a kid's body.

Kaida grumbled something inaudible before placing her luggage on the ground. Cracking her knuckles, the older girl then marched over to the twins and began pummeling them into pulp. Pun hopefully intended in their case. Screams were then echoing throughout the night while the neighbors that were trying to get back to sleep earlier pulsed a vein in annoyance.

"MITSUKI!!! KIYO!!! WHY THE HELL WERE YOU TWO HITTING EACH OTHER WITH RUBBER CHICKENS?!" Kaida roared at them, whacking Kiyo on the head since Mitsuki ducked two seconds before she landed the hit.

"OW!!! I DON'T KNOW!!! ASK MITSUKI!!!" Kiyo shouted back, trying to run away from his friend in the limited space he had. It was limited since his new next door neighbors were standing on one side while Kira was blocking the other. Unless he wanted to break some limbs from falling from the second floor, he was trapped since he didn't have the key to the apartment yet either.

"ME?!" Mitsuki yelled back, ducking as Kaida tossed one of the rubber chickens they were using at her. "HOW THE HELL SHOULD I KNOW?!"

"YOU GOT THEM OUT FROM THIN AIR YOURSELF, YOU BAKA!" Kiyo thundered back, jumping to the right when Kaida tried to whack him on the head again.

"JUST STAY STILL FOR A MINUTE SO I CAN BEAT THE HELL OUT OF YOU TWO!!!" Kaida interrupted, her face red and angry. It just proved to all of them there that she hadn't calmed down one bit at all yet. The other four not in the fight sweat dropped as the twins let out girly screams of fright...one belonging to a boy.

"Um..." the light orange haired girl asked...sort of. Her four new neighbors looked over at them with blank eyes. They all stared at each other for about a minute before what was going on clicked in their minds.

"Oh!" Mitsuki exclaimed, jumping up from where Kiyo laid on top of her. Boy that laid on top of her then landed near the door with a daze expression on his face. Everyone but his sister sweat dropped at that action. "Hi! I'm Mitsuki! What are your guys' name, orange-head, big-chest, and midget?"

The three that were her new neighbors all blinked at her. Well...two of them did. The one she called midget was twitching and pulsing a vein at her. Who wouldn't? No one enjoyed being called a midget.

Kaida slapped her forehead again before whacking Mitsuki on the head. "Don't go insulting our new neighbors you baka!" Mitsuki pouted at her before crossing her arms.

"Well... What else am I supposed to call them by?! I don't know their names!" Mitsuki retorted back. Kaida began pulsing a vein at her stupidity.

"YOU ASK THEM THEIR NAMES IN A NICE TONE!!! NOT BY MOCKING THEM WHILE ASKING THEM AT THE SAME TIME!!!" Kaida thundered, her head seeming to get bigger. You know, like how it happens in the manga/anime. A black background appeared behind her and lightning and thunder began as if a storm was happening. Her teeth got sharp and fire began spewing out of her mouth. Everyone there did an anime fall at what she was doing.

"Um...hello?" the one dubbed big-chest greeted, it coming out more like a question. She was successful in getting all attention back to the three of them while getting Kaida's head to shrink back down to regular size. Goodbye thunder, lightning, sharp teeth, fire coming out of the mouth, and the creepy black background.

"Oh...sorry about that." Kaida apologized, sheepishly rubbing her head. The three she was apologizing to sweat dropped from her sudden change in moods. "I'm Yumi Kaida. We're your new neighbors." They all became silent after that.

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"...that went well." Kiyo snorted after about twenty seconds of silence. Kaida and Mitsuki just whacked him on the head at how rude he was being. The other three just sweat dropped again.

"Who are you guys, orang-" Mitsuki began again until Kaida clamped her mouth shut with her hand. All of them did a second sweat drop as they watched Mitsuki struggled against Kaida's grip. They were amazed that Kaida had an iron grip on the younger baka twin.

"I-I'm, Inoue O-Orihime." the orange haired girl stuttered. The four of them that didn't know her raised an eyebrow as if to question on why she was even stuttering.

"Hi! I'm Matsumoto Rangiku!" the one dubbed big-chest answered. Kaida groaned when Kiyo began staring at her big chest. She and Mitsuki then proceeded to whack Kiyo a few times for being such a pervert that he would have to think twice about doing that again. Once again their new neighbors sweat dropped again.

"Hitsugaya Tōshirō." the midget that looked like an old guy said last.

Kaida nodded in a somewhat formal greeting to them before whacking Kiyo on the head one last time. She then gesturing toward the beat up bruised boy that was sitting on the ground, dazed. "He's Nagasaki Kiyo." she then gestured toward Mitsuki. "And you know the crazy girl, Nagasaki Mitsuki, his twin sister." Turning around she then motioned to Kira. "And-"

"Yumi Kira." Kira interrupted, introducing herself. Kaida rolled her eyes at her younger sister before looking back at Matsumoto, Orihime, and Hitsugaya.

"So...we're your new neighbors...I guess." Kaida then ended dully; sweat dropping at her last part. The others just followed suit. One crazy candy obsessed girl even went as far as to wondered why they were even sweat dropping that much.

Mitsuki then looked straight at Hitsugaya's face all of a sudden. Everyone stared at her with this face: O_O. Why the hell was she doing that was the question on all of their minds.

"..." Hitsugaya didn't say anything as he stood there, twitching. But the two that knew him knew that he was getting more and more irritated at this crazy girl staring straight at him.

"Why are you SO short, midget?" Mitsuki asked after a few more seconds of silence. "Shouldn't you drink more milk? Kira, you should too! He's amazing taller than you!" Everyone but the two names she included stared at her with their jaws dropped open. Did she just...

Kira and Hitsugaya began twitching and pulsing very many veins. It was pretty clear that they didn't like being teased about their height at all. Who in the world liked being called short? Especially by some mentally crazy girl wasn't something that was appreciated either. And the milk comment just added more fuel to the still building fire.

Did that girl ever have any brains?

"MITSUKI!!!" Kira yelled, getting ready to maybe run after the girl who mocked her. Hitsugaya didn't say anything but seemed just about ready to start yelling too. His mouth was set in a firm line that added to his already angry expression.

"EEP!" Mitsuki cried, fear washing all over her face. Pushing past her brother, she grabbed the keys to the apartment that were in Kaida's hands before quickly unlocking the door to their new home. Rushing in as quickly as she could, she began running into the apartment. Some noises could be heard before some yelling and crashes.

Sweat drops.

All of them on the outside stood their quietly while still sweat dropping. Just how well did this day just go? Not well, in terms speaking with all of them.

"...um we better go?" Kiyo stated, as if trying to say goodbye. He didn't wait for an answer before picking up each of Mitsuki's bags and throwing them inside the apartment. After each one he threw in a loud screech echoed through the apartment and back to them. They then all sweat dropped when Kiyo picked up his own bag and walked inside before starting another yell fest with Mitsuki.

Kaida groaned and rubbed her head. A huge headache was coming on. Turning to the somewhat stunned neighbors, she smiled sheepishly at them and waved a small goodbye.

"Um...see you guys later." Kaida said before walking inside. The remaining four on the outside then sweat dropped when they heard even louder screams and shouts that soon followed with the sound of a frying pan hitting someone.

Kira shook her head in annoyance and sighed. "Bakas." Walking inside, she didn't even bother with a goodbye to her new neighbors before shutting the door shut. But even with the door closed the three standing outside could still hear the sounds of yelling and someone being whacked on the head with a frying pan...and maybe a broom?

Orihime, Matsumoto, and Hitsugaya continued to stare at the apartment door next to them for a bit longer as the noise continued. After a minute with the noise still continuing, all of them then looked at each other. Orihime had a worried expression on her face as Matsumoto had an excited expression on hers. It was probably to enjoying having some new friends that she can go shopping with. Hitsugaya just had his ever so serious expression on but with still lingering traces of anger from Mitsuki's comment about his height.

Not really saying anything, the three of them then walked back into their own apartment for the night. They needed sleep to since they were also going to school the next morning. But there was little chance of getting a lot of sleep. It was all depending on the banging and shouting of their new neighbors. And that went well into the still early morning.

School was definitely going to get interesting that morning for all of them.

Me: So...that concludes the end of the first chapter of Icefire. What did you guys think?

Mitsuki: I loved it! It's better than the first version!

Me: -turns to everyone else-

Me: What about you guys?

Kaida: -shrugs-

Kaida: It's fine.

Kiyo: -grumbles- I don't like being whacked by a rubber chicken.

Mitsuki: -sticks her tongue out at him-

Mitsuki: DEAL WITH IT!!!

Everyone: -sweat drops-

Hitsugaya: They're nuts.

Me: -rolls eyes-

Me: It's a story. Deal with it.

Kira: Hm. (For those that don't know this is Yumi Kira, not Izuru Kira from the third division or me)

Renji: Do we have to meet those crazy heads?

Me: Yes.

Everyone else in the Bleach Cast: Damn it!

Mitsuki: HEY!!! I WANT TO MEET YOU GUYS IN THE STORY SO SHUT UP!!!

Everyone: -anime fall-

Ichigo: Does she have bipolar or something?

Kiyo: -shrugs-

Kiyo: Don't know. She's always like that.

Everyone: Greet...

Mitsuki: MEANIES!!!

Everyone: -sweat drops-

Me: Um...review on what you think about the rewrite so far and if there so be anything I should fix!

Me: Ja ne!

*~Kira~*