Hi, as said in the summary, I'm new on and this is my first story and I would like some feedback and hints. And by the way, haters can hate since this is my first story and that I'm a beginner in story writing. Chapters might not be that long but I'm afraid you will have to live with it(!) Thanks for reading!^^ 3 B-)
Silver Flame ~ Chapter 1
Its one day before our heroes set of to the Olympics, the London 2012 Olympics to be precise. And for some odd reason Silver's quite nervous.
(Silver's POV)
I wake up. The sun is still rising, and I can't wait to leave for London! But then again, I feel like something's missing. I get out of bed and walk to the wardrobe. What to wear, what to wear I hear myself say. I pick a white tank top with some jeans, an emerald green cardigan and some grey sneakers. I hear my phone ring and I see Blaze calling. "Hello?" I say.
"Hey Silver, do you want to come with me to the Cafe?" She asks.
"Yeah, sure. See ya there. Bye." I reply. "Bye!" She says, happily.
(Blaze's POV)
I hang up and go over to the wardrobe. "I know exactly what to wear today" I said to myself happily. I picked a knee length fuchsia summer dress with a white cardigan and purple heels. "All ready" I sighed. I left for the cafe.
(Normal)
Blaze sat at a table and waited for Silver. Something caught her eye as she was daydreaming. "Hope I'm not late!" Silver shouted as he was running towards her. Blaze simply smiled when he arrived.
"No, no your not." Sorry, I forgot to tell you Blaze has a crush on Silver and so does Silver to Blaze, but as usual, they're too shy to admit they're feelings. Silver sat and chatted with Blaze until Blaze asked, "How do feel about going to London tomorrow?"Silver hesitated "I-I'm so excited(!)"
"You do know I can tell your lying" said Blaze casually.
"What, I'm not lying" Silver gulped.
"Silver...What's wrong?"
"I honestly don't know, I've been feeling weird all week and I'm not sure if it's the Olympics or if it's just me," Silver said rapidly.
"Has anything else been going through your mind, Silver?" Blaze asked gently."Yes..."Silver mumbled.
"Then, what is it?"Blaze asked. Silver started to blush. He was thinking about if him and Blaze would ever be an item. Of course, he couldn't tell that to Blaze, so he stuttered "I'm sorry, meet me at Tails' Workshop tomorrow morning, he's not going to take us to London until noon. B-Bye Blaze."
He ran off before she could see him blushing a bright crimson.
With Blaze
Blaze was confused, and she knew he was okay, but she couldn't help think about him, his heartwarming smile, the way he cares about her. Suddenly, she bumped into someone."I'm so sorry, I wasn't looking where I was going" The two said simultaneously. Blaze got up first"Huh, you look familiar, wait... AMY!" As she was helping her up.
"BLAZE!I missed you so much!" Amy squealed at her old friend. "Me too! But wait, what are you doing here?" Blaze questioned.
"I've moved in a few days ago. But I couldn't contact any of you because I didn't have anyone's number" Amy explained.
"That's absolutely great!" Blaze said excitedly.
"Shall I tell you what's better, I'm going to the Olympics with everyone!" Amy exclaimed.
"You. Are. Kidding. Me. OMG! THAT'S AMAZING! We have to tell everyone!"
"I KNOW RIGHT! But listen, don't tell anyone, I have a surprise planned..." Amy whispered into Blaze's ear.
"Great idea! I'm sure everyone will be surprised. Hey Amy, can we go to your house, I think we have a lot to catch up on."
"Yeah, you're right Blaze. Oh, and I wanted to tell you you look gorgeous. Special occasion?" Amy said be-dazzled.
"I think I'll tell you at your house." Blaze said.
"Sure. I have a car now, so... Let's go!" Amy said walking to the car.
