Hey guys I hope you enjoy the story and please don't flame me I just started writing fanfics I accept constructive critism and ideas
-I don't own Naruto-
On with the story
-Inside the ice dome-
Naruto and sasuke were getting hit with barrages of senbons from the masked hunter-nin both of them looked like human pin-cushions. Suddenly a barrage of senbons where sent Naruto's way. Naruto froze like ice on the spot.
Naruto's POV
I closed my eyes waiting for the pain to come, instead of pain I felt nothing I opened my eyes to see sasuke lying on the ground barely breathing "why did you take the hit for me?"
"How should I know? My body moved on its own and dobe defeat him ….for….me"
I felt in tense rage then I collapsed.
Mindscape
I found myself in front of a large gate
"So my jailor has finally come to meet me, I'm flattered"
Said a rumbling voice from behind the bars of the gate
Normal POV
"Hey fur ball I need your power for something"
"Alright I'll give you power, that is with a cost" kyuubi said with a mysterious tone at the end.
"I don't care give it to me"
-On the bridge-
Naruto's body was engulfed in flames. When the fire died in his place was a ….
*cliff hanger no jutsu*
How was the chapter good, bad, or just plain ugly?
You might have noticed Naruto was OOC when talking with the kyuubi (A.K.A fur ball) sorry about that.
Ja-ne
-Arashi-