I just got an idea for another story and here it is. I'll add more chapters as frequently as I could. My other stories are still ongoing as well.
Goodnight Flaming star
"It's already morning..."
My name is Alan. I faced some worst events in my life which scars my life badly. But still I could move on as I still got an almost a perfect life. Maybe the most optimum life anyone could have. I could have anything I ever wish. I could do anything I wish. I also have some amazing friends. But by the time I lost much of them. They were not dead actually but you know changing school, going to college etc. I left much of my life behind and maybe much of myself too. I was never able to communicate with peoples around me as I should. For my timid nature I was an easy target for brats and bullies. My life outside my home was just as worse as it could be. The most valuable person I lost in my entire life till now was my grandfather. He died because of cancer when I was nine years old. I missed him so much. I also face some insufferable realities I don't ever wanna remember. I got some new friends and they were really good friends. But even they were unable to fill the gap of my heart. Just like a jigsaw puzzle if you lost a single piece of it no other thing can complete it. Maybe that was it, the all fun of my life has been over. My beloved childhood was over. My beloved grandfather and grandmother were no more. My parents still love me more than anything but maybe they could never understand from what I was going through. I was painfully depressed. I became aggressive. All of the fire which was burning inside me was finally starting to burn the world around me. I was really ashamed of myself. In my anger I totally became another person who can harm anybody around him. After being normal I got really ashamed of my acts. My life was bloomed as a flower and now I was feeling like yellow leaf ready to leave the tree.
"Goodbye mom!" I said as I left for school.
"Goodbye dear," She said "Take care..."
Anyone who will see me will think my life is perfect but not me. I still felt like my life isn't mine. But then I felt like being ungrateful. But surely there was something which I was missing in my life. It was just that I was unable to figure it out. Then I came to know that I was missing my priceless childhood and something which was left behind along with this. I was unable to anything about this so I got myself prepared to face the bitter reality of my life. I smiled at my foolishness and said 'Maybe someday life could be better again. And I could have everything I had before.' I was neither greedy of wealth nor any luxurious life. Just a life filled with fun and excitement sounded really nice to me. And maybe my life could be better if I hadn't lost that much. But I also have so much now. But can anything fill the place of those peoples I ever lost. Maybe I need some more time to move on. My life can be lot more better someday. Someday but when. Is there really that someday? I had to wait and watch.
I took a deep sigh as I sat in my class, looking towards the horrible faces of bullies sitting around me.
I was almost thirteen years old. And now I was not the same innocent person I was used to be. I had changed very much and I mean very much. In a bad way. I had become a person everyone around feared to talk when I'm in bad mood. I was just trying to live my life however I could do it. I just hate myself like this. Why I was unable to have fun anymore. Why I was seeing my life becoming colourless. Just why? WHY? I'm also a human like all others. I also want to be a person who is loved by everyone. What was wrong in it? Why I was keep losing my interest in the things I loved to do. I almost weeps every night when everyone went to sleep.
"I told you, don't take my story book!" I yelled at them trying to get my book back but before I could they had already ripped that to pieces. "You monster!" I growled and tried to attack on them, but one of them suddenly raised his hand and slapped me hardly, and I began to weep. "I swear! You'll regret this one day!" I cried and they just laughed at me. "I swear I tell you."
That certain day I return home with a very upset mood. I just came to my room. Why people always teased me? What I have done to them? Why always me? What's my mistake? Maybe that was my mistake I never done something bad to anyone. If I would be a brat like them maybe I would not a person being bullied. But I don't want to be a brat. Not even like I was now. Maybe not even myself. As when we mess up video game, we can start it all over again or play another video game instead. I wish life would have something like this. I could start my life all over again or have a completely new life so I would not make the same mistakes I made before. 'Oh God, please give me something like this. Something like a restart. Or a whole new life. I promise I'll not make the same mistakes again.' I prayed before I went to my bed and smiled. 'As it ever gonna happened.' I believe in God and I know HE can do anything HE want, but prayers like these just go against the nature and it'll be not less than a miracle if it would be fulfilled. I thought. But it helps me to overcome my feeling of loneliness as it always does. I went to sleep in no time.
I woke up in a whole new surroundings. This was something like I have seen in science fiction movies. I could see a spiral of colourful space in front of me. I could see that there was no land beneath my feet or roof over my head. Only thundering and strange noises. There was something I note before my eyes. All the moments of my life were running in front of me like a fast forward movie. Then I saw something really exotic. Something unbelievable. Something like a whole new world. That was somewhat like one in which I live but looks a lot more beautiful and colourful. I thought it's a dream and wish this dream never ends. I was flying throw the never ending space and I was really having so much fun. Suddenly I felt my body being clenched not in a painful way but with pleasant feeling. I never felt so much relaxed since last five years. I didn't want to close my eyes but that feeling was so relaxing. I couldn't help myself and went to a relaxing slumber as a bright colourful light take hold of me.
I wake up after a while. I felt my bed really hard. Just hard as a stone. 'Maybe I over slept so my body is feeling like this.' I said to myself. And the blanket was on my face. 'Well, what a lovely dream.' I said but instead of hearing my voice I heard babbles. Like a baby. 'Han' I heard the baby's voice again. I was unable to understand whatever was happening. I left my hands to take the blanket of my face. Well, I was unable to do this. I tried to scratch my head. My hands were so much softer. I felt a little pointy thing on my head. It felt like a part of me because I felt my palm touching it. I also felt something itching my back. By touching it I got the sensation of touching the bird's wings. And they were also a part of me. 'What's happening?' I was completely panicked. I started to scream for my mom. But instead of this I was hearing the baby cries. It made me believe that those baby voices was coming from me. I had become a baby. But babies don't have pointy things on their head. Not they have little wings. Do they? What had I become? I continued my cries in hope of someone will answer them.
And at last I see the blanket was slipping away from my face and I could see outside. And it was night. The moonlight felt so good when it touched my face. I stopped crying and opened my eyes. I saw something unbelievable in front of my eyes.
A Unicorn with somewhat humanoid face. She has pink coat and beautiful stripy mane. This appeared to be a female. Then suddenly I was lifted from my place and was wrapped into the blanket. I clearly saw her. She also had wings. Wow, mythical creatures looks really beautiful in reality. But how I reached here? And what am I now?
"Wow, you're an Alicorn, little foal."
Well, I got answer for at least my finale question. Only if I knew what's an Alicorn. Well, I knew now that I'm no more in human form. I'm now a foal. That's explains much. But how? The surroundings looks familiar but I didn't know how. Maybe this was a dream in which I have been stuck.
Then that winged unicorn lady took me inside the big palace in front of me. I was really surprised all the castle were made of Crystals. It was kind of house, I once dreamed to live in. Maybe that was a dream and dream didn't last forever. So I decided to let it continue with the flow.
In Crystal Palace a beautiful Alicorn Princess named Princess Mi Amore De Cadenza aka Cadence was in her slumber when she heard the cries of a foal. She was woke up by these sounds. They seems like coming from outside the castle. 'Strange!' she thought. She saw that her husband Shining armour was in deep sleep. He had a tough day so she didn't wake him up and went outside the castle to check the source of weeping sound. She opened the door and went out from the palace. There she saw a blanket at her door. Beneath this blanket there was the source of sounds. She removed the blanket and gasped at what she saw. It was an Alicorn foal. His coat was light brown and he had a stripy red and orange mane which has a flame like appearance.
"Wow! You're an Alicorn, little foal" She said as she lifted the small Alicorn using her aura
The Alicorn baby has been stopped weeping but he was staring at her with wonder. He had cute purple eyes.
It was about midnight and definitely that Alicorn baby couldn't spend the whole night outside there. So she decided to take him inside the castle. She could think about other matters later.
She took her inside the palace. She diapered him and gave him milk to drink. While he was drinking the milk she silently took him into her daughter's room. Flurry was also in her deep slumber. She reluctantly wake her daughter up.
"What's the deal mom?" Flurry woke up
"Sorry sweetheart but I wanted to ask will you mind to share your bed with this poor foal just for tonight." Cadence showed her that Alicorn baby
"Han, I'll not what? But what's all about this?"
"Well, my dear daughter, he was weeping all alone outside the castle so I took him inside." Princess Cadence was holding the young one with her aura. He was now fell asleep.
"But how he reached there? Who did this?"
"Flurry, I don't have any of your question's answer till now. But for now it doesn't matter. Little one needs a sleep. So can you take care of him for the rest of the night?"
"Okay! But what's his name?"
"I didn't named him yet. Do you have any good suggestions?" Princess asked her with a chuckle
"Ahm, his mane just looks like flames. I think 'Flaming mane' or better 'Flaming star' will be his name." Flurry said and giggled
"Flaming star, you're good at naming sweetheart. Now if you or Flaming needs anything just tell me. I'll be in my room. Okay, Goodnight"
She kissed her daughter and then Flaming star.
"Goodnight mom!" Flurry said excitingly
"Goodnight Flaming star!" She said in whisper as she covered herself and the Alicorn baby with the warm blanket.
She took me inside the Palace. She covered my hind portion with a nappy *Blush*. I can't help myself but to feel embarrassed. But what could I do I'm a baby after all. Then she put me in a little thing which looks like a pram. She gave me some milk in a baby bottle. Even as a human baby I had quit drinking milk through baby bottle after I was one and a half years old but at this time I could tell I was no older than three months or more. I started to drink the milk through the bottle. I started to feel sleepy after a while. My eyelids became heavy and I was falling to a deep slumber.
My all instincts were yelling at me to stay awake for a little more time so I could enjoy being a baby a little more. Even as a dream and even by and as a creature of mythology it still felt very nice and pleasurable. But it was happening I couldn't keep my eyes open for any longer. And it meant that I was going to wake up in no time. Before I completely fell asleep I heard a soothing voice
"Goodnight Flaming Star."
