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Hey guys, this is my first Narnia story so pardon me if there is anything wrong(excluding spelling mistakes). I do accept criticism so do criticise my work if it is not up to expectation. Suggestions are also taken although I cannot guarantee that your suggestion may be used.

Peter stood there, eyes fixed on the wall of ice before him. The White Witch, trapped inside the ice, stretched out a hand through the ice. Both Peter and Caspian reached out a hand slowly, both hands caked in their blood. The White Witch smiled, a drop of Adam's blood will be able to bring her back but with two drops of blood from two Sons of Adam will be able to ensure that she returns more powerful than ever and take over Narnia for good. Before she should take any of their hands, an arrow flew through the air and embedded itself in the ice. The White Witch let out a scream and Peter and Caspian turned around, tearing their gaze from the White Witch, only to lock gaze with Susan with her bow in hand. Caspian could see the hurt in her eyes, but Peter saw nothing but disappointment. A loud ear-piercing scream filled the air and the two boys turned just in time to see the ice wall shatter.

"I know, you had it sorted." Edmund said coldly and walked away, sword in hand.

There was a brief but uncomfortable pause before Caspian turned to find Susan, but she had disappeared. Caspian ran through the corridor, and by the time he had reached the entrance of Aslan's How, Susan was already on a horse, galloping far into the distance. He dashed back into the stable, got on Destrier and galloped out of the stable.

Susan could feel the wind against her face as she galloped into the forest. Seeing the White Witch again revived the memory of past Narnians who had died in the battle 1300 Narnian years ago. When she saw Caspian about to revive the witch, she was hurt. She thought Caspian knew about the terror the witch had brought on to Narnia in the Golden Age. Seeing Peter there considering about reviving the witch had hurt her the most. Of all people, Peter should know the power of the witch for he was nearly killed by her.

'Of all people, why Caspian why? I thought you understood the pain we went through.' Susan thought sadly as she galloped into the forest.

An arrow flew past her, breaking her from her thoughts. Susan loaded her bow and shot a Telamarine soldier, knocking him off his horse. The sounds of horses filled the air as Telmarine soldiers appeared. Susan fought hard and killed about 10 soldiers but she was still outnumbered by about 15 to 1. She felt a sharp stinging pain as sword after sword slit into her. Soon, Susan collapsed on to the ground unconscious, blood seeping from the numerous wounds she had suffered.

"Time of rid Narnia of their queen." The General grinned as he raised his sword high above the ground, poised for the finishing blow.

"Susan!" Caspian yelled into the air as he galloped into the forest. Sounds of hooves riding away made Caspian ride faster.

"No..." Caspian gasped as he came to a stop. Dead Telmarine soldiers lay everywhere, every single one of them killed by arrows. The swords of the soldiers where covered in blood, and knowing that soldiers don't attack one another, it could only be one person.

"Susan!" Caspian screamed, hoping that Susan was alive and would respond.

Then, something caught Caspian's eye. He got of Destrier and walked over to a soldier. Carefully, he yanked an arrow out of the dead body and examined it. The arrow was very small. It was small enough for Reepicheep to use. Caspian carefully pocketed the arrow and searched the surrounding area for Susan. After a long search, Caspian had found Susan's horse, but there was no sign of her anywhere. Devastated, Caspian slowly rode back to Aslan's How, not knowing how to confront the remaining Pevensies.

It took a long time to get back to Aslan's How. By the time he had returned, it was already midnight. He slowly walked to his room after sending Destrier and Susan's horse to the stables.

"Where is she?" came the voice of Peter

Caspian looked up to see Lucy and Edmund with Peter, and with great sadness, he fell to his knees.

"I...I could not find her." Caspian replied heartbroken

"W...What happened?" Edmund asked, trying to stay strong.

"I chased her into the woods. I found dead Telmarine soldiers, her arrows, her horse and this." Caspian answered Peter, reaching into his pocket to reveal the miniature arrow.

Peter took the arrow and looked at it shakily. The two younger Pevensies thought that Peter was going to punch Caspian in the face. Peter slowly sank to the ground and said "I'm sorry Susan, I'm sorry I ever considered it."

That particular night was the longest night the kings and queens had ever felt. Lucy cried as Peter hugged her close, rocking back and forth. Edmund stood there, trying to stay strong but constantly brushed away his tears.

The next day, everyone grieved for the loss of their gentle queen. But the kings and queens grieved the most. None of the Narnians could concentrate on their respective duties. The cooks served sour soup for lunch that day, to everyone's disgust, and the the soldiers could not concentrate on their sword fighting. Expecially the archers in the army. Each time they wield their bows, they remember their gentle yet heroric queen and their visions cloud over with tears and they would miss their targets.

Caspian spent most of his free time in the forest, returning to Aslan's How only when it was time to eat or to discuss the war plans. No one was really in the mood to discuss anything but they tried their best to do so, knowing that if the Telmarines attacked, they needed a strategy.

Group by group the Narnians fell into a state of depression. The army was losing soldiers but mostly their archers. Even Trumpkin was sinking into depression slowly, despite his efforts to stay strong for Lucy. Lucy stayed in her room all day, mumbling to herself while she held a picture of the Pevensies. Peter had given up hope and blamed himself for the loss of Susan. Edmund was just as upset as anyone but Narnia needs someone to hold it together and so he took things into his own hands, taking over the kingdom from his depressed brother.

"Aslan please, please show us a miracle!" Caspian screamed into the heavens, with a sad tone that was sure to break anyone's heart.

Hey, how did you enjoy it. I know it's not according to the movie, but I really hoped you enjoyed it. I'm not someone to force people to review after they read so, review if you feel like it. If you don't, I'm fine with that.

Will update soon.