Moonie: Why should I do this?
Hiei: Just do it!
Moonie: *sniffle* I refuse!
Hiei: *holds katana near moonie's neck* now!
Moonie: *sweatdrop* I don't own Yu Yu Hakusho or any character on there
*cries* but I do own Kiami! So that means you can't take her!
Hiei: Thank god she doesn't own it or the world will be in chaos.
Moonie: meanie! On with the story. Flame me if you want.expect a flame
back.
Hiei sat in a tree resting his eyes in the Makai. He had just came from a mission with Yusuke and the other spirit detectives and was tired. The skies in the Makai was blue and clear with a few clouds floating around and the soft breeze blowing. The trees whispered and the Makai animals scurried around. It was Hiei's time and Hiei's time to be alone in his world. Today didn't feel quite right to him. It was as if something was gonna happen that will change how he spent his days. Strange, and yet a sickening feeling crept into his stomach. It wasn't like him to feel this way. what could it be? He ignored it, thinking it was just his mind playing games on him.
Hours has passed and Hiei had just raisen from his nap. He decided he should take a walk or something to wake him up fully. So in doing as he thought, Hiei wanted to walk to the Makai lake. There he hope to find some food. The last time he ate was at Kurama's and that was to be yesterday. As he takes his time walking towards the lake, he looks at his surroundings to feel more at home. Out of nowhere he heard a small cry. It sounded like a young woman and it was coming from the direction he was heading.
As soon as Hiei got to where he was going just as he thought it was a young woman crying. She looked at least 14. She had brown flat hair that had found its way to her rear and pretty brown eyes filled with tears. She had pale skin and was at least three inches taller than Hiei. As soon as she saw Hiei staring at her she stop crying and tried to wipe away her tears.
Moonie: Liked the new version? I did..it's a lot better than the old one that's for sure. The reason I stopped writing is because I wanted to put the picture up and I didn't want my chapter one to be that long. Don't worry chapter 2 they will start talking! YAY!!!
Hiei: I hate you
Moonie: I know you do! I like it that way. you're even more lovable when you're mad.
Hiei: Hn.
Moonie: people. I have a picture of what she looks like. Want to see? Then e-mail me for it.
Hiei sat in a tree resting his eyes in the Makai. He had just came from a mission with Yusuke and the other spirit detectives and was tired. The skies in the Makai was blue and clear with a few clouds floating around and the soft breeze blowing. The trees whispered and the Makai animals scurried around. It was Hiei's time and Hiei's time to be alone in his world. Today didn't feel quite right to him. It was as if something was gonna happen that will change how he spent his days. Strange, and yet a sickening feeling crept into his stomach. It wasn't like him to feel this way. what could it be? He ignored it, thinking it was just his mind playing games on him.
Hours has passed and Hiei had just raisen from his nap. He decided he should take a walk or something to wake him up fully. So in doing as he thought, Hiei wanted to walk to the Makai lake. There he hope to find some food. The last time he ate was at Kurama's and that was to be yesterday. As he takes his time walking towards the lake, he looks at his surroundings to feel more at home. Out of nowhere he heard a small cry. It sounded like a young woman and it was coming from the direction he was heading.
As soon as Hiei got to where he was going just as he thought it was a young woman crying. She looked at least 14. She had brown flat hair that had found its way to her rear and pretty brown eyes filled with tears. She had pale skin and was at least three inches taller than Hiei. As soon as she saw Hiei staring at her she stop crying and tried to wipe away her tears.
Moonie: Liked the new version? I did..it's a lot better than the old one that's for sure. The reason I stopped writing is because I wanted to put the picture up and I didn't want my chapter one to be that long. Don't worry chapter 2 they will start talking! YAY!!!
Hiei: I hate you
Moonie: I know you do! I like it that way. you're even more lovable when you're mad.
Hiei: Hn.
Moonie: people. I have a picture of what she looks like. Want to see? Then e-mail me for it.