A song fic for the song Coming Undone by: Korn
Anime: Naruto
Couple: NaruSasu
Keep holding on when
When my brains ticking like a bomb
Sasuke ran, ran as fast as he could. Everything he had been working towards, all he had ever wanted now was his chance, his chance for revenge.
Guess
the black thoughts have come again to get me
Sweet bitter words
He had failed so many times before, he failed at eight, and at twelve, but no not now never again, he would kill him
Unlike
nothing I have heard
Sing along mocking bird
you don't affect
me
He stood in the middle of the forest breathing heavy, 'Where are you' he thought looking around, not daring to let his guard down, not even for a moment.
That's
right
Deliverance of my heart
Please strike
be deliberate
The sixteen year old studied his surroundings, 'Where will he strike' the raven thought he heard a rustle form the bushes swimming around immediately to face his enemy.
Wait
There stood Itachi smirking.
"Where you looking for me dear brother? I'm touched." The Uchiha Smiled
I'm coming undone
Sasuke wasted no time, he ran at his brother, full force forming a ball of light known as the chidori while running.
Irate
Sasuke's speed surprised Itachi, he dodged but still was hit in the right leg, and for the first time in his life he cried out in pain
I'm coming undone
"Hurts, doesn't it brother" Sasuke smirked at his brothers pain. Itachi sat for a moment, than smiled himself.
Too late
"That wasn't nice dear brother" Itachi smiled grabbing Sasuke before he could escape using a kunai to rip his shirt near the neck, putting his hand on the curse mark.
I'm coming undone
Sasuke screamed out in pain, as the curse began to sear. A pain ripped through his body leading its way from his neck.
What looks so strong so delicate
Sasuke managed to drill a kunai in Itachi's leg, breaking free from the grasp, the searing pain halted to a stop.
Wait
Itachi stopped smiling, he realized he had to become serious, or be killed, by his newly transformed brother, he was a different person.
I'm starting to suffocate
Itachi pulled a kunai from out of seeming lee nowhere thrusting it at Sasuke, Whom easily dogged it, but Itachi disappeared
And soon I anticipate
Itachi reappeared behind Sasuke hitting him in the back of the neck with his arm. Sasuke flew backwards throwing a ninja star at Itachi.
I'm coming undone
Itachi easily dogged the star only to be blasted with a fire ball jutsu, Itachi's left hand was burned to immobility while dogging.
What looks so strong so delicate
Itachi hid in a tree, scrambling to heal his hand, 'Damn' he thought 'I'm no medical nin'.
Choke, choke again
I thought my demons where my friends
"How unlike you Itachi, running in fear of me" Sasuke smirked, straining to hide his pain "come out and fight me you sick fuck".
Getting me in the end
There out to get me
Itachi smiled at his brother's eagerness, 'Just how strong have you gotten in three years dear brother' he thought to himself.
Since I was young
I've tasted sorrow on my tongue
Sasuke wanted to kill him, kill Itachi and bring revenge to his clan the one Itachi had so mercilessly slaughtered, so many years ago.
And this sweet sugar gun
Does not protect me
"Come out Itachi!" Sasuke yell, his patients wearing thin. "Now before I come to find you, either way your not leaving here alive"
That's right
Trigger between my eyes
Please strike
Make it quick now
Itachi came out clapping "well, well little brother, you've sure shown your true colors…"
Wait
"I think your worth killing now" Itachi sprang forward at Sasuke, thrusting a kunai in his lower stomach.
I'm coming undone
Sasuke winced in pain. Itachi pulled it out allowing Sasuke to fall to the ground grabbing his stomach, his face contorted in pain.
Irate
'No!!' Sasuke's screamed in his head 'Not like this, I will not die like this' Blood rushed out from the point of impact.
I'm coming undone
Itachi laughed pulling Sasuke up by his hair "your still too weak, dear little brother and you always will be
Too late
Itachi laughed at the pitiful sight of his brother still holding him by the hair, to his surprise he saw a smile creep upon Sasuke's face.
I'm coming undone
"You, why are you smiling" Itachi spat at Sasuke
"Surprising, I thought you would have realized it by now, a confused look occupied Itachi's face
What looks so strong so delicate
Before Itachi could move a muscle, Sasuke thrust a kunai directly into Itachi's heart, making sure it would go in all the way.
Wait
Itachi's eyes widened at the entrance of the kunai, his body shocked, his mind shocked.
I'm starting to suffocate
Itachi coughed letting go of Sasuke hair and spewing bright red liquid upon the ground.
And soon I anticipate
Sasuke watched as his brother fell to the ground, dieing, he sighed "now what do you think of me dear brother" Sasuke smirked
I'm coming undone
"Your weak brother" Itachi weakly smirked, Sasuke frowned shoving his foot into Itachi's face
What looks so strong so delicate
"And why's that" Sasuke purred
"You sunk to my level, and took revenge" Itachi purred back
I'm trying to hold it together
Head is lighter than a feather
Shock hit Sasuke like a punch in the gut; as much as he hated to admit it Itachi was right he was weak. He had sunk to Itachi's level without realizing it.
Looks like I'm not getting better
Not getting better
Sasuke fell to his knees at the realization of this, why had he spent his time chasing Itachi, and not spending time with one's he held dear
Wait
He abandoned his closest friends, no his family, to become the person he hated most, he had turned into a monster.
I'm coming undone
Sasuke laid down on the hard ground, blood loss consuming his consciousness, 'forgive me, Naruto, Sakura, Kakashi'
Irate
Just as he began to fade he heard a most familiar voice that of Naruto
"Sasuke!" He heard the sweet voice call out in worry
I'm coming undone
Sasuke managed to lift his head long enough to see his former team running at his beaten body, concern streaking there faces
Too late
Sasuke smiled, 'no matter how much I may screw up, they still seem to care' he thought 'persistent basturds' Once again he smiled, his vision fading
I'm coming undone
He took one more look at his dead brother, He smiled sadly tears streaked his face, but no he wouldn't die here
What looks so strong so delicate
He had to live not for himself, but for his friends, they needed him, more than he needed himself.
Wait
Team seven made its way closer to the injured Sasuke, even his usually cool faced sensei had an expression of great concern.
I'm starting to suffocate
He hoped, as the darkness consumed him, that they would forgive him, knowing he would never forgive himself
And soon I anticipate
Thinking it was alright he allowed sleep to overtake him, smiling as he did tears still fresh on his face
I'm coming undone
He had peaceful dreams for once, in a very, very long time, dreams of happier times, dreams of his friends, knowing he wasn't alone anymore
What looks so strong so delicate
He couldn't wait for those times to come once again
Fin
Yola Angel Kitty here
So how'd ya like my first ever song fic, it was difficult as heck to fit the context with the song, but it's not too shabby if I do say so myself, and no SASUKE DIDN'T DIE!!! Sorry, sorry got a little carried away, anyway please R&R!!!
Angel Kitty