Hey guys this is my first ever fanfic and tbh its a bit pants its basically the story of harry potter but bits have changed and at times may get a little confusing im sure you will be able to spot the differences ;) im gonna try to upload 2 chapters together each time because most of them are short.

I'll try and upload as much as possible but my laptops rubbish and i have school so i may not be able to upload as much

hope you enjoy and comments or ideas please review

P.S sorry for an mistakes :)

-CHAPTER 1-

Well the day had come the, day I have been so hyped about for years.
Today I start Hogwarts school of witchcraft and wizardry.

A received my acceptance letter on the 24th of august (my 11th birthday.) I was in the middle of eating my birthday breakfast of bacon and toast when a beautiful large barn owl with a small letter flew through the air then swooped into the kitchen via the window and perched on my shoulder, which startled my mother when she turned around ,after bewitching the sponge and cloth to do the washing up, I took the letter which beared my name and address;
Miss
Big Bedroom
11 Magnolia Lane
Camden
London
With my trembling hand and started to prise it open and as if my magic my older brother Fred along with my other family members were silent as they peered round what they were doing to watch me open my letter. 'Hurry up Charlie jeez' moaned Oscar whilst rolling his eyes 'she's taking ages mum!'. When I had torn away the envolope in my hands was a heavy piece of greyish brown parchment and carefully written was;
HOGWARTS SCHOOL
of WITCHCRAFT and WIZARDRY

Headmaster: Albus Dumbledore
(Order of Merlin, First Class, Grand Sorc., Chf. Warlock,
Supreme Mugwump, International Confed. of Wizards)

Dear Miss, ,

We are pleased to inform you that you have been accepted at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. Please find enclosed a list of all necessary books and equipment.
Term begins on September 1. We await your owl by no later than August 29th.

Yours sincerely,

Minerva McGonagall
Deputy Headmistress.

'Don't forget the bit at the back too' said my little sister Levi in a small sing song voice. She was only 2 years younger than me but she was still so excited to be attending hogwarts in two years time.

The slightly smaller piece of parchment on the back was the same parchment as the other piece with the same calligraphy in bright cobalt blue ink.
It read;
HOGWARTS SCHOOL
of WHICHCRAFT and WIZARDRY

UNIFORM
First-year students will require:
sets of plain work robes (black)
plain pointed hat (black) for day wear
pair of protective gloves (dragon hide or similar)
winter cloak (black, with silver fastenings)
Please note that all pupil's clothes should carry name tags.

COURSE BOOKS
All students should have a copy of each of the following:

The Standard Book of Spells (Grade 1)
by Miranda Goshawk

A History of Magic by Bathilda Bagshot

Magical Theory by Adalbert Waffling

A Beginner's Guide to Transfiguration by Emeric Switch

One Thousand Magical Herbs and Fungi
by Phyllida Spore

Magical Drafts and Potions by Arsenius Jigger

Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them
by Newt Scamander

The Dark Forces: A Guide to Self-Protection
by Quentin Trimble

OTHER EQUIPMENT

1 wand
1 cauldron (pewter, standard size 2)
1 set glass or crystal phials
1 telescope
1 set brass scales

Students may also bring and owl OR a cat OR a toad

It was hard to contain my excitement as I laid my letter on the table. 'We will have to reply straight away or Professor McGonagall will get worried remember the 10 owls that arrived when I left our reply too late when Oscar went...you do want to go don't you?' My mum asked unsteadily as if she expected me to say no or something...
'No mum I don't want to go whatsoever I would rather eat slugs than go to hogwarts!' I cried sarcastically whilst rolling my eyes, my mum caught wind of this and conjured a small bottle of ink and a deep brown eagle quill out of thin air with her want and began quickly scribbling her reply. I took the owl upstairs to Oscars room and gave it some owl treats. When Fred started hogwarts mum and dad bought him a large hazel screech owl which he named Feathers I know original right?
'Charlie!' I heard my dad call 'bring down the owl so we can send the reply'!
So I skipped down stairs to see my father stood in his work robes (he works at the ministry of magic as an auror but not full time) with the reply in his hand about to say goodbye.
He gave me the envelope and a quick kiss on the cheek as he said goodbye and apparated ( a form of wizard transportation quicker than any muggle travel) on the spot.
After sending the letter I slumped back in my chair to finally finish my now cold breakfast before mum announces 'well today we can go to diagon alley'

what do you think of my first chapter? For every review will give some cookies to a character of your choice please make sure to tell me your character or Dad may get a little impatient and eat them all :S