Last seduction
by Sunnterra
11/8-9/15
notes: This popped into my head last night and I had to get it posted. The title got suck in my head after seeing a rerun of Castle last night (Once Upon a Time in the West-one of my favs), and then thinking back to the ruined wedding where Beckett gave up 'her day with Lanie' to go get divorced. I know kinda late but what can I say when something strikes me it does. And what can possible go wrong with a 'Castle' twists. Everything!
I know it's a short chapter but I had to post this before I saw any promos for the new episode. (the last seduction). I have not seen anything on it as of yet (except the title of course) I don't really like to get spoiled till it's closer to that episode. I also don't want it interfere with my idea that popped into my head. I am writing this one quickly, I already have about 15 pages of notes on my desk as we speak now. For a friend just emailed me telling me to look at some pictures for that episode. (which I am not going to) and from what he has seen and read it looks to be a pretty good one (for me at least). He told me that Beckett 'looks good' but doesn't she always? I told my friend I wouldn't cause I am writing my own version on it. So if you are one of those spoiler kinda people don't tell me. I want to be surprised but I do want to read some reviews on this one. Tell me what you think so far. Next chapter coming soon, I know that I am suppose to finish one story at a time but if I hate to post things after the fact, then people think that you copied the idea. So any way I hope you enjoy this one too.
Intro/summary:
Castle wants to give his wife a surprise gift for their first year anniversary. Something that she (they) didn't get before her (their) wedding. Something that both wanted and thought every fiancee should deserved to get. One last day of say 'freedom' before a life long journey together. And that's what Castle was going to give to Beckett, a day, her day but with his very own Castle twists.
Chapter 1:
Once again things didn't go too well for Castle's attempt to win his wife back. Their one year Anniversary, if they did in fact make it to that day, Castle in his heart was trying to hold on, was coming up in a few days.
"I have to do something special for her guys but I have no idea what to do?" Castle asked the boys, as he sat in the precinct. He was hoping that if he stopped by he'd get to see his wife, Captain Beckett again. He told himself that he would stay away from the precinct because of what happened last time. But he couldn't do it, this had become his home and he was being kicked out of it. And with Beckett not living with him as well, this was the only place that he got to get a chance to see her. He was just hoping that the boys also wouldn't kick him to the curb as well, before he could win her back. He knew they would have some ideas, for they got to still work with her everyday. He wanted to show her that he still loved her, and with their anniversary coming up. He was going to do just that.
"Castle stop trying so hard, bro. That's one of your problems." Espo answers him, after a few seconds of hesitation to getting involved with another one of Castle's schemes.
"Yeah all this trying to win her back is not working with the two of you," Ryan adds coming up. "Try..."
"I have tried talking to her but she just avoids me." Castle glances at the cups of coffee Ryan had, and sighs. That's something that he did for Beckett all the time. One of 'their' things. Something that he missed doing for her. A simple gesture that meant the world to them both. Castle swallows, "She says that she needs time and that it's not my fault but..." Castle continued on.
"Then my suggestion to you bro as my friend," he shot Ryan a mean glare, "Is to take your own advice and give her something that she asked for.." he suggested, taking a sip of coffee from his cup that Ryan made him. "like this time."
Castle lowers his head, with a sigh, "I guess that you're right Espo. A little more time..." Castle fake smiles. That's not what he wanted to hear from his friends to but maybe that is what was right for the two of them. No what was right was the two of them in each other's arms working together on this, whatever it was. Like real married couples do. But Beckett seemed to not want that, or at least that's what Castle thought.
"Of course I am," Espo once again glares a mean death glare in Ryan's direction, telling him not to say a word on that one. Then Espo blurts out, "What's the one thing missing from your wedding, well besides," Espo wiggles his fingers between him and Ryan. "us," Espo was getting up, for his cup of coffee was well, nasty.
Castle had to think on that one. What was the 'one thing' missing. The one thing that she wanted, when I wasn't listening. I got to think, help me boys.
"I am really sorry about that guys, we made the decision to get married on a spare of the moment kinda thing, it was nothing...we just did it right then..."
"Without thinking, right," Ryan added. "About..." he glance at Castle, wanted to see what he would say to that. Wanting to let him know they still haven't forgotten or gotten over his betrayal.
"Yeah, without us bro." Espo also chimes in. "You didn't even think about what it would do to us." Espo went to get the ringing now phone on his desk.
"And we didn't even get to throw you a..." Castle puts his fingers up to Ryan's mouth, which was kinda awkward for him to do. But he wanted Ryan to shut up for a second, for he just thought of the perfect gift for his wife.
He snapped his fingers. "I got it." Castle shouted out. "I know just what to get her."
"What?" Ryan asked with a quizzical look on his face.
"You my man," Castle pats him on the shoulder as he gets up. "Are a genius."
"Thanks," Ryan responds, then shakes his head not knowing what kinda idea that popped into Castle's head just because of a few words. "But what did I say?"
"A girl's day out but with my famous Castle twists." Castle lefts his eye brows, and now has the biggest grin on his face.
Oh no he didn't just say that, Ryan thought, "Wait Castle that's not..."
"Whatever you guys came up with," for Espo was watching them, but couldn't hear them. "You will have to do it..." Espo turns to place the phone back down, when he faces Ryan and Castle again, Castle was just gone, vanished.
"Where did he?" Espo shook his head. How can he disappear that quickly.
"He's going to give Beckett her surprise,"
"Oh, a 'together' surprise..." Espo chuckles some.
"It's not what you think, Javy and I think might back fire on him."
to be continued...
I laughed at the 1st review of a cheating Beckett. That's funny. but...um, no that's not where this story was going. But it does have a 'Castle' twists in it! Thanks you for the reviews, more to come soon. Chapter 2 is now up!
