(Please no flames, this is my first Fan fiction story ever)
Anakin couldn't concentrate. The drug inserted in his arm was making focusing impossible. Distantly he heard Obi Wan telling him to stop, but he couldn't. He
felt himself scream, and then fight with somebody. He hissed angrily at Obi Wan. Obi Wan pushed him over a lava fall. Anakin
wailed as he fell. Briefly, he felt the Force surge for half a second before he slipped back under the drug's haze. Anakin caught a ledge and climbed back up the
cliff. Obi Wan was crying, unable to know that Anakin was okay. Anakin leaped back up the falls and jumped towards Obi Wan. He felt his arm and legs burning,
then he couldn't feel them at all. Anakin fell to the ground. Then he broke through the hazy drug. He began to cry hysterically.
"Obi Wan, help me!" he wailed. Obi Wan frowned through his tears. "No, Anakin. You chose this path, now you must face the
consequences." Anakin desperately grabbed at the beach, screaming for Padme. There was no reply. Obi Wan hesitated as
he felt a familiar presence. It was Qui Gon Jinn! Qui Gon said "Obi Wan, help him up and heal him". Obi Wan grabbed his
brothers arm. He held Anakin to his chest. Then Obi Wan brought Anakin back to the ship, got Padme, and set off for Polis
Massa.
(You people choose. Do I continue, and how do I make it Multi chapter?)