So here's a new story I'm writing. I hope you guys like! J
Clare P.O.V
"Clare! Hurry up, their here!" I finished up packing and hurried out the door and into Fiona's car.
"So you guys ready?" Fiona asked, practically jumping up and down her seat.
Eli, Adam, Fiona, and I are heading out to the woods for a whole week. I was surprised that Fiona owned a cabin in the woods. I just thought the woods wasn't her thing because well you know. I'm really excited about the trip. I used to come down here with my parents when I was nine. I just love the fresh air, the smell of the pine trees, the lakes, just everything about it!
"What you thinking of Blue Eyes?" Eli interrupted my thoughts.
"Just about the woods and what we're going to do there." A smirk then appeared across his face. He lowered his hand and started massaging my thighs.
"I have an idea of what we can do." He whispered in my ear and then started nibbling on it.
I giggled and pushed him away, playfully.
"Aww! Adam why can't you be like that with me?" Fiona cried out, pointed at us.
Adam just rolled his eyes. "I'm sorry, I'll try babe, I promise."
"I knew you were smart." She said and pecked his lips.
Eli and I laughed and then cuddled up for the rest of the ride.
Eli P.O.V
"Ugh! There's so much mosquitoes! And its so freaking hot!" I complained, trying to kill all the mosquitoes that were attacking me.
"I told you not to wear black. It attracts the sun!" Clare said, sounding like my mother.
"I'm sorry mom!" I spat out sarcastically. Clare just rolled her eyes and kept walking.
I was in black shorts and a black tank top with black converse. I packed some white and dark brown clothes, too. I just hate wearing colorful stuff. I like dark stuff way better.
"We're here!" Fiona announced, throwing her hands up.
This place looked awestruck! It looked exactly like in the movies. It was a small, wide space, and it had the cabin, obviously made out of wood. The wood was this light, caramel color. It even had a little chimney. The lake was dark blue, but it sparkled, from the sun. And a bunch of trees everywhere!
"Wow, this is AWSTRUCK!" I screamed out, taking off my shirt and jumping into the lake.
Adam jumped right after me in his full clothes because of his situation. The girls just stood there laughing at us, saying how we look like adorable little kids.
"Come in the water!" I yelled, motioning my hands.
"We're not wearing our bathing suits!" Clare and Fiona both yelled at the same time.
"So?" Adam and I said at the same time, too.
"Come on, just jump in with your undergarments! It's practically like a bathing suit."
The girls both looked at each other and shrugged. They took off their clothes and jumped in.
We splashed each other and then played chicken fight.
Clare got on my shoulders and Fiona got on Adam's shoulder.
They both shoved each other, pulled each others hair, slapped each other, and other pretty harsh things to each other.
"Whao, you girls sure are aggressive." I said, trying to balance Clare.
"Uggghhh! Hah! I win!" Clare yelled out jumped off of my shoulders.
I was surprised she won. I expected Fiona instead, she just looks tougher.
"I'll get back at you Clare Edwards!" Fiona threatened.
Clare stuck her tongue out and then turned to me.
"That's my girl! Hope you will be that rough with me tonight." I whispered the last part into her ear.
She giggled and whispered back, "We'll see."
Clare P.O.V
"I think tonight is the night." I mumbled to Fiona.
We were both sitting on a big rock, by the lake, outside having some girl talk.
"You mean, your going to loose it with Eli…tonight?" She squealed. Clapping her hands and jumping in her seat.
"Yes, now hush!" I ordered her. "But are you sure about it Clare? I mean, we all know that your vow means a lot to you. I just want to make sure your going to loose it to someone that your really sure about…that worth it."
"I'm sure Fiona. I promise! I mean, Eli and I have been through a lot and we're still together. And he really cares about me. And I always feel safe when I'm with him."
It was true. Those words are very true. I love Eli…a lot. And I'm pretty sure he loves me too…but we will have to wait and find that out tonight…which is pretty soon.
"Well, I'm going to go inside and cook something up." Fiona said while getting up and shaking the dirt off her shorts.
I stayed on the rock. I bet down and got a stick and started writing on the dirt: Eli + Clare
I traced a heart around it and smiled at my art work.
I heard ruffling noises. My heart began to pick up speed. I didn't know what to do. Should I run into the cabin…but end up being chased after and most probably killed. Or should I just stay calm and hope that whoever it is, isn't going to do anything to me.
I then felt someone tap my shoulder.
"Ahh!" I screamed, jumping up from my seat and turning around to whoever the person was.
"Clare?" The two guys asked, stunned. They were staring me down.
"Jake? Fitz? What are you both doing here?"
So, what did you guys think about the first chapter? What do you think is going to happen? Hmm? Review please! 2 reviews= Next Chapter!
