Second story on Fanfiction; A story about my OC!
If anyone actually reads this, feel free to point out where I can improve or where I did wrong. I'm kinda nervous about the structure of my OC, so tell me if he seems too... mary-sue-like.
-Silver
The silver furred kitten winced as the banks of the river broke and the water rushed out in huge amounts. He rummaged around the icy liquid, flaying his tiny white paws in no particular direction. Where was his mother, father, and littermates?
He could not hold his breath much longer. The pressure of the water was too great and eventually his final source of air was squeezed out of his tiny lungs. In the struggle, the water seemed to deepen in colour and the silver kitten could almost make out semi-transparent cats circling around him. Their faces were sympathetic and the she-cat with pale grey fur stepped out.
Her words barely heard, the she-cat touched noses with the silver kitten.
"Rest, hero."
Then a flash of purple and violet swarmed him, as his vision began to blur...
