One of my first stories. Just tell me what I need to get better at or what the next chapter should be about. I hope you like it! Whole story is in Tris's POV.

-EBrilliant46

Prologue

"Mom, I don't want to go to this stupid camp!" I yell at my mom as she packs my bags. My name is Beatrice Prior. My parents are forcing me to go to a stupid camp so I can make friends and be more social. I don't know why they don't think I'm social, I have Christina. We've been best friends for 12 years. We met when we were 4 and became best friends. I used to have another friend, his name was Tobias. We were best friends, but he moved away when I was 7.

Once she is done, she hands me my bag and drags me to her car. "Mom pleeeeeeeeeeeeease don't let me go! I already had my summer planned out with Christina. Have a couple sleepovers, got to the mall, you now, that kind of stuff." Mom just looked annoyed. "Sweetie, you need to make other friends. Christina is a nice girl, but that is the only girl you hang out with! Your father and I had already payed for your admission and they don't have refunds so you have to go."

Mom starts the car and drives out of the driveway. The whole car ride I was glaring out the window or was on my phone texting Christina.

"Were here." Mom says. I look out the window and see a huge wooden sign that says Dauntless Camp. There are lots of trees and bushes. My mom pulls into the parking lot and drops me off. I walk up to a counselor and ask, "Hi I'm Beatrice Prior. Um' I was wondering where I should go to check in. I'm new here." The counselor answers, "Hi, I'm Ana, you should go to the admissions office to check in. they will tell you all you need to know. The office is straight ahead."

I walk to the admissions office and find the front desk. I ask the lady there, "Hi, my name is Beatrice Prior. I hear to check in and find out my cabin." The lady at the desk looked up. "how do you spell your name?" the lady asks. "B-E-A-T-R-I-C-E P-R-I-O-R." I state. "Thank you. Since you signed up late for camp you will be sharing your cabin with a boy. Your cabin is cabin 13. Hope you have a fun time at camp!"

Time Skip

I walk up the steps of cabin 13. I walk in and see that my cabin mate has already unpacked but isn't here. Walk to my bed and start to unpack.

Once I'm done unpacking, I lie down on my bed and close my eyes.

I here footsteps coming up the stairs to the cabin. I must be my cabin mate. He opens the door and walks over to his bed without noticing me.

"Hello to you to!" I say sarcastically. He turns around. He looks really familiar. "Sorry! I didn't see you there. Are you my cabin mate?" he asks. "Yeah, I am. I am Beatrice Prior, but people call me Tris."

"Bea, is it really you?" he asks.

Cliffhanger! I hope you liked to first chapter! I will update soon. -EBrilliant46