Hey people! This is my first warriors fanfic and I hope it is good. I'm always open to ideas so please tell me how I can improve.
Chapter 1: The Mission
The tiny kit opened her eyes to see that she was dangling in the air. She could see her small paws wriggling around below her. She saw black and white paws of her father underneath her. She wondered how he got such huge claws. She was curious about where he was taking her and pestered him about it but he wouldn't answer. He was always so secretive about almost everything he did, or perhaps it was just he couldn't talk because he had her scruff in his mouth. There were so many questions that he never answered. Either way the kit was growing impatient. She started to jerk around and he finally dropped her to the ground. She landed on her bottom with a thump. "Ouch!" She yelped.
"That was your own fault Storm" Scourge grumbled.
"I was giving you a break from walking. Your little legs won't get you anywhere. Luckily we're almost there. You better keep up".
She followed slowly behind him. Maybe she should've just waited till he had gotten her to the destination. She didn't want to ask if he could carry her again because he might get mad. She already knew what he would say. "Bloodclan cats must be strong and fierce. You are weak. I can't believe your going to be the next leader when I'm gone". She sighed and picked up the pace slightly.
Scourge finally stopped at a fence. It looked like any other ordinary fence. "Why are we stopping here" she croaked as she breathed in deep breaths.
"Are we taking a break?" she asked with her eyes looking hopeful.
"Bloodclan cats don't take breaks. Besides the work has just begun" he answered.
He picked her up by the scruff again and hauled her up onto the fence. He quickly explained the plan to her. "Go in there and act cute and helpless which shouldn't be too hard because..." he looked her up and down. "Your you. Anyway, they are probably gonna put something on your neck. Once they do come outside into the backyard and I'll save you".
"I thought Bloodclan cats weren't supposed to be cute and helpless" Storm said smugly.
Scourge growled and facepawed himself. "Just go in there and do what I told you to do".
He pushed her off the fence with his paw and she fell with a thud. Luckily there was soft grass for her to land on. She started to meow on the floor as if she had really been hurt. A tall thing with two legs came outside. She meowed more and dragged one of her legs around in the grass. The two leg picked her up and cradled her like she was a baby. It spoke in a language she'd never heard of. It put her on the ground gently and went off into another room. She looked down at the weird grass on the floor. It was a beige color and it was a little bit rougher than normal grass. It felt good to knead her claws on it. The two leg came back in with warm milk and...Rabbit droppings? She drank the milk but left the droppings or whatever they were. Storm looked out the window. The sun was going down and it was almost night. How long does father expect me to stay here? she thought.
The twoleg laid a pillow down on the floor and then left into another room. Storm looked at it suspiciously and laid down in the spot she was currently at. She slept peacefully on the floor. She was used to sleeping that way anyway. When she woke up the twoleg was gone. "There's nothing to do here!" Storm groaned.
"No toys or anything".
She leapt onto the window ungracefully and sat facing away from it. The sun's heat felt good on her back. After a few minutes she thought she heard someone yelling. She turned around and was startled to Scourge. "Dad! Why are you here?" She asked and took a step towards the window.
"You're sure taking your time!" He yelled, though it was muffled through the window.
"I miss you too" she said flatly.
Scourge rolled his eyes. "I need you to hurry up before you become too soft. You didn't eat those pellets right?".
"Nope, I stayed far away from them" she answered.
"I'm surprised. Good girl" he said and she could see a small ounce of pride in his gaze.
"Well, I'll be waiting. I expect you to come out with that collar today" he said and turned around to jump off the window sill.
Stoem sighed and put her paw on the window. "I wish I could go out there instead of being cooped up in here".
She walked in a circle and curled up, with her tail covering her face to go to sleep. She woke up to the sound of a door being closed. The twoleg came in excitedly, holding a bag. It took a small circular thing with a huge hole through the middle of it out and put her on the couch. It put it around her neck. Storm smirked. That was easy and rather boring. Why was father acting like this was some huge, hard mission? She watched the twoleg take out something that buzzes and put it too its ear. "This is my chance" she whispered and headed over to a door that had a net on it.
She could smell the air outside. All the smells she loved and missed. She slashed through the net and ran out. Scourge was waiting but this time he had brought Bone and Brick with him. They all smiled once they saw hat she had the collar. "That was an easy mission" she said and smiled.
"It's not over yet. Tonight, you become a true bloodclan cat" Scourge said and deflated her happy mood.
He picked her up and carried her back home with Bone and Brick trailing behind at Scourge's side. When they reached the border to bloodclan they were met with even more bloodclan warriors. There was an army of cats following behind Scourge as they walked down a long alleyway that led to the heart of Bloodclan territory where the strongest warriors hung out. Storm was surprised to see the weak and the strong side by side as they gathered in a circle. They opened up the circle for Scourge, Bone and Brick to pass through. Scourge put her on the ground gently and called out to his cats. They got quiet very fast. "Tonight is my daughters final test to becoming a true bloodclan warrior! Will all of the kits her age line up here in front of us." He called out.