Before I start I just wanted to let you know there will be a trailer soon !updates every Sunday and Wednesday

_- My name is Midori I am currently 14 years old . The things I like are my brother helping others and Dauntless. My dislikes are My father , Candor and the color orange . I have one brother and no sisters I have one father and no mothers well not that I know of ... The time of my brothers choosing day is creeping up fast . Too fast . I'm afraid he might leave me with our father , who I love HATE .

But I do want him to leave as well so he can be free . . .

I tie my hair into a knot like all the other girls in Abnegation but i dont get it trimmed like they do because I dont have a mother to do it for me I go downstairs and don't even expect breakfast from our abusive father but he usually expects me to make it . So I do . I put it on the table for him , before I leave I slip a sandwich into my pocket , not for me for Tobias .

I'm late for school but that never bothers me no one even notices Tobias waits for me at the door we walk to school together on the way I give him the sandwich which , as expected , he insists on sharing . Tomorrow is the day of my brothers aptitude test I know if he gets anything other than Abnegation he's doomed , or he could lie . But what could he get other than Abnegation he doesn't ALWAYS tell the truth so he couldn't get Candor and he couldn't get Amity because he would fight back if necessary Erudite ... I'm not sure i doubt it but I'm not saying my brother isn't smart I wouldn't be surprised if he got dauntless . He's brave .

Any way why an I worrying ? It's not my aptitude test is it . I was daydreaming so much i didn't notice school was over I do it a lot come to school too late and leave to late too , but Tobias still waits for me no matter how late I am once he waited for me when I was an amazing 4 hours late for school !

We walk home together in silence , dreading the beatings we would get...
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