Hello people i'm Dark Doopliss here with my first story! (yay)
Just would like to tell you...
Anyways let's get the story started...
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Paper Mario: The Lord of Shadow
Once, very long ago before the reign of the Shadow Queen. There was a being that was more powerful than she. He was a being that could take over the whole universe just by himself; but was sealed away because of his dark powers. So now our story starts in the dim-lighted land of Twilight Town...
"Mwee hee hee hee hee!" A shady figure laughed. "It's our chance, Marilyn! Now that that traitor, Vivian is just waiting for us at the house. We could go to the thousand-year door and get that other box that was hidden and let the evil more powerful than our queen free into our world."
"Guh." Marilyn bellowed. (As most people could guess the other is Beldam.)
"Maybe even he could bring the queen back." Beldam added.
"Guh" Marilyn said.
"So what are we waiting for? Let's go!" Beldam commanded.
So the twosome went to the thousand-year door and started to search inside the ancient old palace behind the door. After hours of searching Beldam almost decided to give up...
"This is taking too long!" Beldam yelled.
"Guh" Marilyn said.
"Not now Marilyn. I'm searching for that stupid box!" Beldam said.
"Guh" Marilyn repeated.
"I said not now Marilyn!" Beldam said with a hint of anger in her voice.
"Guh." Marilyn repeated again.
"Fine then. What!" Beldam yelled.
She turned around to look at Marilyn who apparently was holding a box that was completely black.
"You found it!" Beldam yelled as she took the box out of Marilyn's hands."But now we need a poor soul to open this box for us because we can't open it because of that shadow curse." Baldam thought about this for what seemed like hours, but only five minutes.
"I know who." Beldam said. "Mwee hee hee hee hee hee! Soon enough the world, no, the universe will be crushed within a death grip and bow at the Shadow Lord's power!"
"Guh" Marilyn said.
" What do you mean that this plan won't work?" Beldam asked annoyed.
"Guh" She bellowed.
" O yeah Mario and his goon squad. Believe me the Shadow Lord will destroy him and all of his friends. All of them." Beldam grinned evilly.
"Well we've got to send this to that foolish king Bowser. He'll open anything that is brought before him." She said.
"Mwee hee hee hee hee hee hee!" She laughed.
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So what do you think so far? Review for me. Need to know if it is good or not.