Nafara hi um I just wanted to make this all of a suddenly and any advice would be helpful.
WARNING im going to be shoving a lot of information in the beginning

"I've got to keep going." she thought as she grab her side to try to stop the bleeding again and stops running and leans on a huge black panther at the edge of a cliff overlooking an ocean "I can't let those bastards catch us if they do... I will die... and she will become a sacrifice for that BITCH and I can't let that happen." she thought grimly the panther shrinks down into a small cat she grabs the cat and jumps of the cliff then thinks 'Wait! I'm getting ahead of myself lets start at the beginning of this story where all of this Fucking Shit started, oh yeah And I better introduce myself first. she thought angrily and cheerfully as she was falling.

Her face changes to a drill Sargent like persona then yells in her head 'Alright dust mites Listen up my name is Zara
I'm a dark elf female with blue eyes. I'm 3 Feet 11, I look like I'm 14, I am bipolar." she says happily "Oh... and I'm an Assassin she states

'my panther is pretty cool (face becomes loving and smiles) she's was born from a dire tiger and a spectral panther or so she told me also meaning she can use both their abilities her names Black Hart (kisses her hand and blows) she's 4 Feet high and 5 feet long including her tail and she can also change herself to fit the enviroment for instance on snowy mountain she becomes white.
And can change her size but can only become smaller she can become as small as a tiger cub and back
And can transform into me (bends over depressed) I don't really know where she gets that from.

(evil grin) 'My weapons are my Throwing daggers and swords a long sword and a short sword with a sash on it that I can use to attack enemies that are out of my reach around 10 feet away I also can use a bit of magic like feather fall I should use that.(uses feather fall)

'And what im wearing is leather armor with green leggings and bandages around my waist a brown cloak and a pair of boots and an emerald with a blue streak thru it necklace under my armor and two black gloves and a pouch on my right hip.

Black Hart has a green bandanna around her neck and (becomes bored)

the languages I know are common, elven, dragon, deep speech, animal, and sign languages (smile becomes cheerful morbid) I like Black Hart, poisons, apples, my swords (becomes sad) my teacher... his name was Houndaer, (shakes her head) an-anyways I dislike spicy food and (face fills with Hate) I hate the spider queen. and prophecies and there's a reason that I hate prophecies (sigh) it all began on the day I was born she thinks

Flashback

long ago in a manor that's name has been lost to time we hear a womans screams.

"One... two... three... push! alright she's out!" Nurse says
"Madam Alia what will her name be?
"Zara... her name will be Zara." Alia says
"b-but madam that name is from..." nurse says
"I KNOW WHERE THE NAME IS FROM HER NAME WILL BE Zara AND THAT IS FINAL" she yells
As she said that she hears explosions go off
"Shit we are being attacked now of all times?"
"Let out the cannon fetter now"
"Yes madam Alia"
"And put my dauter in the place behind the secret compartment"
"Yes madam Alia"
End flashback

Zara "Thing is I even though I was just born I still remembered what happened" she thought as she hit the water

END CHAPTER Nafara yes I know this is short sorry and any who reads this can you let me know what you think of this story so far
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