Hey guys, this is my first chapter of my first fanfiction so I hope its not too bad. Enjoy.
Chapter 1
Tris' POV
Today was the day for aptitude testing; you know the test that tells you what faction you're in whether it's Abnegation, Candor, Erudite, Dauntless or Amity. I was nervous, in one way I wanted to stay in Abnegation, so I could be with my family but on the other hand I wanted to try something different, be brave, honest, or kind, but somehow, I didn't want to be intelligent, something seemed sus about that faction.
I was on my way to the test and I heard someone yell "Beatrice! Beatrice!" I turned around and saw my brother Caleb. What the hell did he want? "Beatrice, I'm so glad I caught up to you. I was wondering what you wanted for dinner tonight? Because it is our testing day Mum and Dad said we have the choice of either tuna with parsnip, pumpkin and carrot or we can have snapper with peas, sweet potato and potato. So which would you like?"
"Are you alright with us having the tuna? It's just what I am craving for some reason."
"Yes! That's what I was hoping you would say. You just made my day. I am SO nervous for the test. Are you?"
"Haha, yes I am really nervous, anyway I have to go, Caleb. Bye."
"Bye, Beatrice." Caleb yelled as he speed walked over to the factionless to cook the food for them.
I was thinking that hard I didn't realise that I had reached the testing room; I was too busy thinking about my results to even notice how fast I was walking. I was just outside the door when Jeanine turns around and says "Ah, Beatrice, so good to see you, are you excited for the test?"
"Ecstatic" I said sarcastically. That stupid mole on her face disgusts me.
"Very well then, good luck" Jeanine said politely, yet obviously annoyed by my sarcasm.
"Some of us don't need luck, we have talent." I turned away and rolled my eyes without her seeing. I hate her. I have a feeling she is up to something and I have no idea what, but I intend to find out.
I walked in the door as the testing lady turned to me and said "Hi, I'm Tori, I will be testing you today. If you have any questions just ask."
"Hi, Tori, I'm Beatrice Prior." I said and she gave me a look as if to say 'does your dad beat you like Marcus did to his son?' I ignored it and sat down in the chair as she instructed. She handed me a small shot glass with some blue, near transparent, liquid. "What is it?" I asked with a worried look on my face "Relax, Beatrice, it doesn't taste gross, it tastes just like water and it will enable me to see into your head. Now lay back don't stress and it'll be over before you know it. Drink up and relax." I started to get drowsy and before knew it I was in the room, by myself in front of this huge mirror.
So I know this chapter was really small but I hope all my other chapters will be heaps longer. I am aiming to post a new chapter weekly but it depends on how much homework I have. Please PM me or leave a review if you hate or love my writing and if you think I should keep writing. Feel free to give tips or advice as I want help to become a better writer. Thanks.