I have never done one on a move, so I'm really exited about this one. I have had this idea about Alice Returns for years, and I couldn't wait to write it down. I have a lot of homework, so I can't post that much, but that won't stop me from writing! Please review and enjoy!
Alice Returns
I sat on the ship like nothing was going on outside. Although I already knew, a large six headed monster was attacking our ship. I felt the sailors shouting out orders to each other, men shrieking and getting tossed into the water. I wanted to go out and fight the cold blooded monster, but I had forgotten how to fight, how to survive. Maybe it was magic in Underworld; maybe it was just all a dream. I walked to the cage where a beautiful butterfly sat sleeping peacefully.
No way could it all have been a dream. I thought of Tweedle Dee and Tweedle Dum and smiled to myself, those two were two peas of a pod. And the Chesire Cat! His grin was so wide, it made the quote "A smile could stretch a mile" true. And the Mad Hatter. He loved his hat so dearly, it was ridiculous.
"To the boats!" a voice yelled overhead. I grabbed the cage and ran to a chest in the corner of the room. I pulled out a large sword. I knew I was going to need this.
The sword was my father's, but I had taken it as a reminder of him. I ran up to the main deck and saw the beast. It's silver heads swung wildly about while men were randomly throwing and launching things at it.
When we traveled past what everyone thought was the end of the world, it was utter chaos. A huge storm erupted and many sailors were lost. I gazed at the silver creature and realized an idea. I climbed up one of the mast's (I had learned the trick from a fellow friend) and clung tightly. The world swayed around me and I waved my sword hoping it would reflect some light to catch the monster's eye. And it did.
As soon as the monster swung its head to me and came forward, I jumped and clung tightly to the scaly skin. If you ever try this, don't its gross, it smells, and you can fall off the slippery monster. My butterfly cage was tied to my hip and was swinging dangerously close to falling. I raised my sword and stabbed the eye. It drew back screeching. It swung its head back and forth, and I felt myself falling down. Kerplash! I hit the water with such force, black spots dotted my vision. It wasn't much help though, for the murky water already made it impossible for me to see. I felt myself sinking, I didn't know how to swim!
An arm grabbed my leg and dragged me down even further.