Plumes of Blood
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Long, red shafts
Swaying silently, on the careless breeze
Why are they so red?
The thing that separates Battousai from all,
Alas, his blood-red hair
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He fights as a demon,
But living as a human being, he is something much more.
Much more,
He is a human, stained with the blood of the innocent.
That kind of blood, will never confide.
Nor will any.
Assassination?
Blood. Sin.
Torture?
Blood. Guilt.
Himura Kenshin, known as Battousai So many deaths, of crimson rain Where did it go?
The blood-shedding demon.
Will never clear.
The hair of crimson blood..
The scar of lament's flood...
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:-) you like??? well, I think it might be a little scitter-scattered, but is it still a good poem?? i believe every poem has a message, but this poem does'nt really get it through until the end!! BUT.........it's mainly about Kenshin's blood-stained hair :-P
and the name, "Plumes of Blood" the idea came from toilet marauder's "White Plums" :O)
yes, and I'm fully aware that "plumes" sounds like "plums" but it's still a different word!!! EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK!!!!!!! n-nx