Chapter 1 The Beginning.
What I Own & Do Not Own: I don't own atla or the characters but I do own this plot & No Stealing O_O
Zuko pov ( Just so you know he is 10)
"Oh crap my father is going to kill me!" I have exactly 3min and 45sec to get at this meeting welcome party thing (oh just so you know Zuko is like 10). "Huh?" I said as I saw a family of water tribe people they look much different than in my book it says that they are barbarians and that's a complement….. For the barbarians... "Well I could say hi since they are…. Right where the meeting is…..? Why would we welcome those savages?" I said as he made a disgusted face. Hey that's a girl! Well since I've been taught to be a gentleman I have to say hi since there's a girl here I said as I rolled my eyes as I got closer I saw her face and her little blue innocent eyes she seemed sad but full of pride all at the same time I looked at her and my look said you better enjoy your pride while you can cause your about to lose it all of it Period. And she just look back at me with a look that said I don't care what you say I'm a girl you couldn't hit me if you wanted to.. and even if you tried I would whip your butt so look out HOTHEAD! I felt like I wanted to smack her upside her head but I knew if I did I would hear from my mother… so I just kept walking over to the meeting welcome thing.
Katara POV. ( Just so you know she's 8 turning 9 in about 6 months) I hate this floating thing of steal I said as I sat in my a.k.a room on the ship. Get out of here you prisoner I thought he meant we drove around and he put me back at my tribe…. But I was so beyond wrong…. I was at the…(gulp) Fire Nation Palace but instead of freaking out I just calmed down and only thought of pride and I little bit of fear to then I looked around and I saw a little boy he looked about Sokka's age (oh right Sokka is her brother) before I could think he gave me a face that to me meant I should just lose my pride now so I would get over it soon of course I gave him a face back that was like get out of my face I will whip your butt right now if I have to. By the looks of it he was very happy with the response I gave back, so I said Mission Completed.
I love myself for making this I will keep writing till I get to chapter 5 then I must have 5 reviews in 3 days and then I will make another 2 chapters (Reviews do not have to be completely positive they just have to tell me what I need in the story and what I don't.) thanks! =^_^=