This is my first time ever trying to write a fan fiction story. I've lived fan fiction for ages now, Undercover Honeymoon is my absolute favourite so I thought I might as well give it a try.

Disclaimer: I own nothing

All constructive criticism is gravely appreciated ?

Erin's POV

I sit at my desk struggling to keep my eyes open with the sound of raindrops and the cold breeze hitting the windowsaround me. It'sofficially winter in Chicago and I'm feeling 've been working this case for what feel like years,
now it's finally over and we put yet another criminal in jail.

"Right, who's up for Molly's?" I hear Antonio ask all of a sudden. I nod at Jay in silent agreement "Yeah why not" he answers for both of us. Jay and I, huh I like the sound of that, we've been on and off for a while now butit seems to be getting
serious.

Everyone else follows to agree to the Molly's plan until Voight interrupts to say "Actually I've booked us a team trip to The Bahamas for a week, you all deserve it after that last case". Suddenly the room went silent. He can't be serious, can he?

"Don't look at me like that, yes I can do something nice for my team. Now get home and pack we leave tomorrow 10am" he looks around for a minute then his eyes settle on Adam Ruzek, the trouble maker of the group "Don't be late". He finished with that
and retreated to his office.

"Looks like we're going home guys" Alvin announced from the corner of the room. Then came the grunts of the disapproval from the youngsters.

I speak up "Come on we're getting a free vacation quit complaining". I hear some sniggers from around the room as we all start packing up our things.

They all disperse into their own little conversation and I notice Jay sneak up beside me and ask "We staying at yours or mine tonight?". We've been going between apartments for a while now and I know it would just be easier to have one apartment and live
together but we just aren't ready for that yet.

I take a moment to think about it "Well, most of your stuffs at mine so it would be easier to pack if we just stay at mine" I say with a shrug.

"How did I get so lucky, a girlfriend that's smart and beautiful at the same time" he says with that stupid grin that always makes my heart melt. "Mmhmm" I give a sarcastic nod and a roll of the eyesand start heading for the staircase.

"Bye guys" we both shout from the bottom of the stairs. The muffled responses are blurred out by that dreaded sound of rain battering car roofsand the concrete below us.

The drive was a mixture between the usual banter and teasing we always do and a comfortablesilence. The rain didn't stop all night all I can think of is the beautiful beaches in the Bahamas. Tomorrow couldn't come faster.

Should I continue this story? I know it's not the best but it'll get better the further I take it. ? ﾟﾘﾋ

~kirsty