Hey there, this is only an idea so reviews would be very helpful and very much appreciated. Just a bit of background this story is going to be based on an old Irish story about three young women who battle to maintain their spirits when they're sent to a catholic asylum run by sadistic nuns, they're sent because they're believed to be sinners. The characters of the three girls had always reminded me of Emily, JJ and Garcia so I thought I'd bring them into the story ;-)
Please review and tell me if you thing I should carry on with this idea 3
The Magdalene sisters.
JJ's story.
The beat of the old Irish folk music was echoing loudly throughout the old stone building, all of the guests were listening and watching quite contently to the men stood on stage. That is all except for Jennifer, she sat shoulder to shoulder with a young man whom she had come to be quite close friends with, the both sat laughing and joking together and thoroughly enjoying their night. The rounds of applause sounded from the other guests as the band finished playing and before she had chance to join in the young man lent over and whispered into her ear, she followed him excitedly through the mass of people and up the stairs only stopping when they were both confined in a small crampt room.
"So what is it you wanted to show me?" Jennifer was quite confused as she looked around the room, whatever it was it must be small she thought to herself. "Come on Kevin what's the secret?"
She looked around once more before turning back to her friend; quickly he lent in and pressed a firm kiss against her delicate lips, Jennifer's hands immediately pushed hard on his shoulders to get him away from her. "what do you think your doing?" she spoke stepping away from him, "I'm going back down" as she tried to walk past he grabbed her more forcefully this time and began kissing her again. "Kevin stop!" A sharp slap across his face caused him to recoil enough for Jennifer to gather her composure. "now what would your father say?"
The young man looked totally taken aback and slowly turned walking back out of the door, Jennifer sighed a breath of relief before following suit to return to the party. She lent forward and opened the door slightly just as it was pushed forcefully back into her causing the young blonde to go flying backwards into the room. Kevin this time locked the door behind him before taking the opportunity to get the upper hand over the beautiful young blond.
"No, please stop it" she shouted through breaths, "Kevin stop!" His hand quickly silenced her cries as it was firmly in place covering her mouth.
Downstairs the party was in full swing, the whisky was flowing and the music was playing loudly from the band, no one had noticed that Jennifer and Kevin had even been missing as the man in question returned down the stairs and headed over to the drinks table. He took a long gulp of the Guinness left on the table before walking into the back room to join the other men, as he walked through the mass of people dancing along with the music he shot a look over to his beautiful blonde who was sat talking to another woman, he turned his gaze away when he saw her begin to well up and the other woman turned and shot him a death glare.
'Jaysus Kevin if looks could kill' he thought to himself before walking through to door to the other men.
Jennifer was sat by herself hugging her arms tightly around her chest, she didn't notice when her mother's friend came and took the seat next to her. She knew something was wrong with her and before long Jennifer had began telling the woman what had happened upstairs with Kevin. The woman seemed totally taken aback by what she had just been told, and even more so when she spotted the man in question drinking across the room from them as if nothing had happened. Jennifer didn't know what to do when the woman stood and marched over to her father, she knew that shed told him as soon as his eyes met hers from across the room, and if that wasn't all the proof she needed she got it when he marched straight into the back room and came out with four other man frog marching Kevin out of the building.
The following morning Jennifer was awakened by her father storming into her bedroom, "come on, quick get dressed I want you downstairs." The tone of his voice left no room for arguments so Jennifer did as she was told and quickly got out of bed.
"mmm…Jen what's happenin'?" a muffled voice came from under the covers.
"Shh I don't know" she gave her sister a small smile before walking out of the bedroom and down the staircase to her father.
The older Jareau sister slowly climbed out of bed and headed to the window of the bedroom she shared with her sister, she spotted a posh black car parked in the front garden. 'who the hell does that belong to?' she thought to herself. She watched as her father walked out from the house and through a bag into the back seat before instructing her sister to follow it.
"daddy where's Jenny going?" after no reply she tried a different method. "mammy where's father Boyle taking Jenny?"
She didn't get an answer as the car sped away with her her sister.
