The Red Deadly Vampire: This is my sister story she writing im just editing it. so we hope you guys like it
"Karin! Karin!" Himeka yelled across the yard at Karin sitting on the porch away from dreep thoughts,she looked up at her."Karin! Karin! Have you seen Kirio?"She asked in a conserned voice."No, I'm becamed quickly concred "Why, do you need him for something?" She replied trying to remember what she was thinking about. "Yes,it's time for his monthly cheak up at the vet!"Himeka voice grew more louder and woried. Karin started to consume Himeka panic vibes,but she tried to stay clam for her sake. "well do you want me to help you look for him?"Karin offered."You don't have to Karin, but if it's not a bother..."Himeka startedto twirl her to keep herself got up from the porch swing."It's ok,i wasn't doing anything anyways." She told Himeka. Himeka jumped up and grabed her hand "Ok! Lets split up,you cheak inside and i'll stay out here." Himeka said with a smile on his face.
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