The Rose Alchemist: Rewrite
Chapter one:
Hello all! The Rose Alchemist is something we have done back in the past. It was a hit on but just another story at fanfiction. We are combining accounts and writing different stories. Hopefully you can tell who does the writing. Sommer is writing This one! This is the first to be posted on our account.
In the beginning i want to describe stuff and set up the story, so if you keep reading it will get sooooo much better and more action and lots of talking and love scenes.
P.S. My filler is ...
Her whole room is a very light purple. She has purple curtains,and purple clothes hanging out of her dresser. She has purple walls with a violet lining all around the tiny room. She's wearing gloves right now,but for another reason. She lays asleep with nothing but a shirt on. A purple shirt. This girl is obsessed with purple!
Her name was Summer Theadora Glenful. She has straight blond hair with pink streaks going all through it. She got up and opened the window to let in the sunlight. " I've over slept. It must be noon now."She said calmly. If you take a look around, there are pictures on the dark brown dresser.
It was a picture of her and another girl. She had dark brown and two bangs with pink tips at the end. They must have been sisters. Another has a handsom man with pink running down the sides of his hair, instead of grey,in the frame. The pink didn't make him look less manly. He was wearing the millitary out fit and was looking all professional.
Summer headed down the stairs slowly. She yawned and ended up in the kitchen. Her best friend was there, since she lives with them. Her name happens to be Brittany; she had light brown hair with dark green all over the ends. She had a loose hoodie on and tight shorts. Surprisingly it looked good on her. Even though she was rich she wore all kinds of clothes. She was Summer's mechanic. Summer had automail hands, and a mechanical secret,that only Brittany and Emma know. Summer doesn't even know her own secret. Who's Emma? You ask. Summer's 13 year old sister.
"Good morning, sleepy head." Said Brittany. Good morning she replied very sleeply like. Emma was just eating Frostie O's. Nobody but Emma eats her Frostie O's. Nobody but Emma likes them anyway. Emma was ignoring Summer today because Summer took a bite of her cereal, but Summer can't eat certain things without being 'allergic'.
Brittany got up and handed her a plate of eggs and said,"I made you eggs! Eat up!" Summer ate the eggs relunctedly. Sometimes they make her sick. (No offense Brittany.)
Soon afterwards Summer fainted. She was on the floor. Brittany took her dish and put in the sink as normal. Emma just looked down and away. She hates it when its check up time. She never liked watching, or seeing Summer so... lifeless. Summer always wakes up in her bed. They always say she should get checked for allergies.
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DING DONG!
The doorbell rang,and thats really rare. They live on a mountian surounded by trees. No neighbors for miles and miles, except for that family of bears. Let's just say,hard to get to.
Summer answered the door. It was a blonde boy wearing a black hoodie and red pants. He was traveling with a large bag and had this large guy in armor carry it for him. He had a loincloth on his armor, which he didn't need. He was wearing armor for petes sake! This surprised Summer alot. Such wierd guests!
"Konichiwa!" He said the rest in Japanese,"Can we stay here? We need to rest for our journey" At first Summer smiled, then she She frowned,and lastly she drooled. She couldn't understand him at all!
"Wha? Um.. Sprekinze English? Paulivue france? Me no understand?" She tried to see if he spoke her language. She couldn't understand.
The blonde boy,Ed, Was fluent in both languages. It happened to have been required in the military,because both langauges are very popular. He quickly switched to English,no trace of Japanese. It was actually his native language,English. He restated his sentence,and she let him in.
" Thank you!" The armoured one said. She just said,"Um.. sure?"
Emma heard the noise and came into the room, which happened to be the living room. She was wearing a tank top and a skirt; her shoes had ribbons that went all the way up to her skirt,and kept going. She happened to look pretty that day.
"Wow" Al said. She seemed to come out of nowhere and steal his heart. She was petite,and didn't look very strong. She looked quiet and shy. She Looked like an angel to him.
She was just afraid of him though. Although She was curious, she didn't look at him the way he looked at her.
End:Chapter one
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