New Girl in Town:
Chapter 1,The 4 Curtis'
*Rayven POV*
Well it's my first day in a brand new state, Oklahoma,Tulsa to be exact. I'm sitting here in my brother's work pick-up truck, in between him and my middle brother. We are driving to our new house. Everything we own is already there or here in the bed of the pick up.
"Boooring!" I said as we oldest brother Curtis looked at me from the drivers seat,smiled and stated "Get over it munchkin we got 5 more hrs to the house." I hate that name, but he can call me that and get away with it. I'm 5'4,he's 6'3, do the math. I decided a nap was in order. I layed my head down on my brother Curtis' lap while my legs were on my brother Josh.
*Curtis POV 5 hrs later*
Five long hours later we are attempting to move into our new house. We walk into our house and are surprised to find 5 big guys moving our furniture which was brought the night before,into its respective places, like they knew exactly how the house should look.
"Uh hi?" Rayven my adorable sis says all confused.
"Hi,I'm Darrel...Darry for short. Y'all are probably wondering why we're here in your new house."
"Yea we kinda were." I said
"We're just moving things in, and no, we ain't the movers,they sucked. They were just putting it all in random rooms. I been in this house enough to know where things go. So me and my buddies decided to do it and see if you needed help with anything else when yall got here." I was stunned,how many complete strangers do you find willing to do that for ya? Not too many I am damn sure.
"Thanks Darry, my name's Curtis, and this is Josh and Rayven, my brother and sister."
"What a coincidence, mine and my two brothers last name is Curtis." He said pointing at a semi-tall,somewhat muscular teen with wheat -gold colored hair , though it seems to be getting dark around the sideburns and bangs,maybe from the change in weather from hot to chillier, and brown eyes. Then again to a teen quite a bit smaller in build and with reddish,brown-gold hair with green eyes.
"This is Ponyboy,and the taller one is Sodapop, and yes those are their real names."
author note
havent done this in awhile so please no overly critical comments, but yes i do accept constructive criticism. im sayin this right now though, i dont care if johnny and dally died, i made them live and in the next chapter ill go into that, so no reviews bashing me for not being real to the book.