Ok, when I said I wouldn't write again, I lied. Since I now have a new computer and all my old data from my other one is gone I think I need a fresh start.
Also this person PMed me and said that she would read my fanfics, I don't know who she was but she seemed nice and I guess I need some new material anyway.
But please tell me what you think of this, honestly, I know Mary-Sue stories are controversial.
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The lush grassy fields of the Mamodo World burst into bloom as the lovely thirteen year old mamodo Masumi, named for her beauty and purity, skipped through them.
Masumi's destination was one of the utmost importance. She was heading towards her race's secret base.
You see, Masumi was no ordinary mamodo. She was of a special breed called the Mary-Sues.
The Mary-Sues were known for their gorgeousness and power beyond compare.
They didn't need to have a book owner if they went to the Human World, and they all had the best, most powerful spells.
They also had the power of seduction.
Any Mary-Sue was able to make any male of any species fall in love with her, and they all had their special techniques of doing so.
Because of this, all Mary-Sue mamodos were banned from the millennial battle for Mamodo King, which took place in the Human world.
The Mary-Sues had had enough of that, so they were planning to open a portal and send the seven prettiest Mary-Sues into the Human world to fall in love with seven main male participants in the battle for Mamodo King.
After the seven received their target's love, they would capture it in a bottle and come back to the Mary-Sue hideout where they would combine all the love together and use that power to take over the Mamodo World.
Masumi was the prettiest of the Mary-Sues and so was one of the seven to go to the Human World.
The only problem was that she was busy charming a store owner into giving her free clothes and by the time she had put on her new garments, she was already late.
So she skipped, since she was too pretty to run, as fast as she could towards the hideout, making flowers appear everywhere, leaving a trail right to where she was going.
The meeting of all the Mary-Sues was over by the time Masumi arrived, breathless from her journey.
"Oh yay!" Dolly, a five year old mamodo, named for her cuteness, squealed, "You're here, Masumi!"
"How typical," Kana a fifteen year old mamodo, named for her power, unmatchable fighting skills, sneered, "You're always late, I bet you spent a day looking in the mirror."
"Sorry." Masumi apologized, scanning the room.
She saw that all one hundred Mary-Sues were stationed in the base, in various ages, posing expertly for no one in particular.
In the middle of the room, there was a swirling pink vortex, the portal they had created to get to the human world.
"Alright! Line up!" a tall Mary Sue ordered, "Line up all that are traveling through the portal and into the Human World!"
Masumi left the door way and stood next to Tristessa, a fourteen year old mamodo named for her sadness.
The three other Mary-Sues in line were Kerri, a fifteen year old named for her dark and mysterious character, a twelve year old named Zeki who was very clever, and finally a seven year old girl with no name or memories, but with unbound-less power she couldn't control.
After all the Mary-Sues had stepped in line, the one that had ordered them to do so told them to step through the line in an orderly fashion.
She also explained that when they arrived in the Human World they would have a bottle that had a name on it. They had to find the person with that name and have him love them.
"NOW GO!" the Sue in charge declared and all seven young ladies stepped through the portal.
A few shadowy figures trudged across the fields where Masumi had just been, following in a trail of flowers.
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