A poem I wrote after watching the episode with the soul piper or whatever
UNTIL MY EYES OPEN
Stay up late,
Mess around,
Always hear that soothing sound
Doesn't work,
Like a fire,
Hatred spreads; a deep desire
Sin and vengeance,
Lust for blood,
Primal instincts,
Like a flood
Feet move fast,
Heart beats slow,
Life essence drains,
A steady flow
Paranoia,
At its worst,
Shadows in the corner lurk
Blood red eyes,
Open somewhat,
A horrid feeling in your gut
Eyelids rise,
Hackles raise,
Deep crimson color,
Far from praise
Searching your soul,
Screaming hell,
UNTIL MY EYES OPEN,
You just fell.
some EXPLANATION!
A child's ghost starts out with innocent foolishness, but refuses to be soothes, and ignores the soul piper's flute. The ghost grows more malicious and does more evil things like killing 'n' such. Then they realize the soul piper eye thing, so they're paranoid and scared. Then the eyes start opening and they brace themselves. The 'far from praise' and 'searching you're soul screaming hell' thing is like the soul piper is judging them, and not in a good way, damning the spirit. 'you just fell' they were dragged down to the underworld! :D
I hoped you liked it, I was pleased with how it turned out
v(wo)-o ~NYA!