H.R.
Chapter 1
"I'm afraid we're going to have to let you go".
"I don't understand, what did I do?"
"You didn't do anything, but our company is downsizing and your department needs to make cuts"
The newly jobless Dean Evans left without another word, his boss having said all there was to say. He packed up his desk and rode the elevator down to the lobby and out of the revolving door into the street. In front of the building was a dark limousine with a purple sheen to it. Its rear passenger window rolled down and a thick cloud of cigarette smoke billowed out.
"Good afternoon Mr. Evans" said a raspy female voice from inside of the limousines smoky interior.
"Who are you" asked Dean
"Should you accept, I'll be your new employer" stated the mysterious stranger, exhaling another cloud of smoke.
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