Gakuen Deeper, Taku?

Disclaimer: Umm I do not own Samurai Deeper Kyo...or any of its characters...umm but I umm hope you enjoy reading this...

Author's notes: Okay umm so umm I'm kind of new at this...well not the writing but the site and things...but it doesn't mean I'm good at writing to tell the truth I'm awful...but it seems so vivid and detailed in my head...I guess it just doesn't connect to my hand because once I start writing I just go off to a 'tangent' should I say plus my grammar is horrendous...so umm any criticism on improving my writing or about the storyline or structure etc. would be helpful...umm as long as its not too rude...umm thank you...okay that's it...I think...so umm enjoy...I hope...

Warning: Umm I don't really know if this is necessary but umm I just want to inform the readers that this story is completely and utterly different from the original characterizations and storyline of Samurai Deeper Kyo...please don't be upset with me I just wanted to test my imagination which is a necessity for any writer right? so...umm thanks...

Summary: In the outskirts of Tokyo Japan an elite and private academy for the richest of the rich is stationed, known as Tenchi Gakuen. Tenchi Gakuen is a prestigious academy where not only your wealth and lineage counts but also your intelligence, because even if your the President's or Bill Gate's offspring if you do not pass the entrance, qualification and induction exams you will not be welcomed. However for the 'less fortunate' with superb intelligence the academy does offer a scholarship and only one scholarship for any students that wishes to study in Tenchi Private Academy. Although for 50 years ever since the academy set this challenge and miracle to the 'less fortunate' none has ever passed let alone answered a single question correct, that is until a mysterious 15 years old decided to apply... accidentally ... This is where the life of the teenager Yuya Shiina turns upside down as she gets an unprecedented call...

Chapter 1

Enclair Restaurant is the most famous and elite five star restaurant in the world, with its main building stationed in France; it has many branches in the major cities around the world which includes Tokyo, Japan. In Tokyo, enclair restaurant has two branches, the bigger branched is in the south and the smallest branched is located in the west. In this small branch is where a vibrant and free-spirited yet clumsy heroine of our story is working as her part time job. Working enthusiastically with a warm smile on her face as she greets customers and talks to other staff members, little did they know that this cheerful young lady was in a middle of a crisis as she's fighting her shattered body that has been working for 16 hours a day and up to 5 hours of night shifts every day for 2 whole weeks. As she tries to stop her body from collapsing with a headstrong and stubborn mind she continues to work professionally, as her close colleagues begins to notice the dizziness in her.

"H-hey little miss! How about going for a break huh?" said a middle age man with brown ponytail hair, a well shaved face and hazel worried eyes, with a frowning eyebrows that made his forehead wrinkles even more visible. This man was in the bar serving some stressed out men in suits, that which all the lunch time staff would always conclude that the men have just been fired or promoted which created even more pressure and it was only mere minutes before they would head to the Plaza, known to the staff as the "Chuchoter Avec Plaisir" (Whispers of Pleasure).

"Eh? ... Ah, I'm alright Henry-san, honto!" replied Yuya carrying an empty tray smiling at an even more worried Henry and before he could speak she interrupted him noticing the unfortunate men.
"Ah, soka! What's the bet for today?" she asked trying to desperately divert Henry's attention to the men instead of her. The natural blonde had her hair plated and then placed in a high ponytail with her fringe almost covering her tired emerald eyes that's hidden behind a rather odd spectacles, wearing a long sleeved white shirt with the restaurants logo tucked over a black trousers with black ballet-like shoes.

sigh, "Alright but after your shift promise to take a break alright?" replied Henry taking an order.
giggle "Okay I promise... so come on what's the bet I'm feeling lucky today" she winks then turning round to place her order.
"Hmm, I'll have to ask Megumi, I think their betting right no-" interrupted by Yuya.
"Nane? H-hey wait up Megumi-san, hedoi Megumi-san" running towards the staff room almost out of breath and opening the door.
"Ah, Yuya-chan you made it!...eh...Yu-yuya-chan...are you alright?" Megumi asks with a worried face, but is suddenly surprised when Yuya starts sobbing.
"He-hedoi, Megumi-saaaaaan, WAAAHH!" she yells bursting into a tears like a child that's been stolen a candy, dropping to the floor.

Inner Thoughts:
Other staff members were watching the whole comical scene as Yuya is now sobbing like a child robbing her eyes sitting on the floor and Megumi stroking her head as if she was a kitten. They were thinking these -

Person 1 - "Ah Yuya-san is so cute..."
Person 2 - "Yuya-san your so cute like a lost kitten... I feel like hugging her..."
Person 3 - "Ah Yuya-swan kawaii... let me pat her too Megumi-swan..."
Person 4 - "Oi, oi, Megumi the kid's not a pet..."
Person 5- "Taku, children these days..."

"Megumi-san said hec that she'd call me hec, demo in truth hec she was just hec havi-Waah" Yuya said whilst sobbing when Megumi starts to interrupts her before she runs out of tears.
sigh, "Mataku, whoever told you we were starting without you!" as she pinches Yuya's cheeks.
"Eh? Honto?" Yuya says wiping her tears with the back of her hands.
"Ah, seriously, so childish your like a lost puppy" Megumi now patting her head gently and doting her.
"Eh? Demo, demo..." Yuya begins to get teary eyes once again and Megumi stops her before she cries again.
"Hai, hai, so hayaku, we don't have all day its almost time-" unable to finish her sentence as Yuya begins to get cheerful again.
"H-Hai!" Yuya yells enthusiastically punching the air.


As the door opened the man sees a group of staff workers gathered around a circular table placing bets as if they were inside a casino. With an annoyed look he was about to scold the fools however he sees an even more incompetent fool spying the 'particular' men from the bar and reporting back to the table the information he has gathered.

"Mon dieu" Whispers Henry to himself smacking his head when Yuya notices him.
"Ah, Henry-san why don't you join us. Megumi-san just bet-ted that the man with a bald patch on his head will be going first and I bet that the man with the beard will go first I bet-ted my cheese cake for Megumi-san's Häagen-Daz ice-cream then for the second round I bet-ted the chocolate cake that I found earlier and..." Yuya says hardly taking any breaths, but Henry stopped listening to her halfway.

Inner Thoughts:
sigh "seriously this girl, once she gets started she just can't stop talking and by the way Yuya-san why are you only talking about Megumi-san's bets apart from your own?" sigh "I feel sorry for the fools absolutely got ignored."
Person 1,2 and 3 - Oi, oi Yuya-san were here too you know..." in tears "Ah, Yuya-san..."
Person 4 - sigh "You sly sly woman Megumi..."
Person 5 - "Taku! Children these days..."

Continuation of Yuya talking -
"...and then and then for the 4th round I bet-ted the apple pie I also found along with the chocolate cake see Henry-san I told you I was feeling lucky today, anyways for the-"

Henry's thoughts:
"Hai, hai Yuy- mate..." as he ponders.
"...chocolate cake?...apple pie?...found?..." pondering even more.

-Whilst Henry recollects himself please enjoy a baby Yuya cuddling with a white tiger-

"EHHHHH?" Henry yells to the top of his voice.
"Yu-YUYAAA!" he angrily says holding onto Yuya's head and turning her face to him.
"H-hai?" Yuya replies innocently battering her eyelashes.
"Don't "h-hai" me, what do you think your doing betting MY stuff?" he says drilling Yuya's forehead with his knuckles.
Yuya acting like a chibi with big comical watery eyes yet surprisingly irresistible says ever so cutely "Demo, demo Henry-san...I really wanna eat Häagen-Daz ice-cream..."
Henry looking at the innocent and cute Yuya softens up.
sigh "Fine! Then that means when you win I get half the share" Henry states backing down unable to resist Yuya's comical face.
A non surprise Yuya suddenly blurts out in happiness bursting with energy.
"HAI!" she says with a big bright smile on her face as everyone in the room looks at her dearly filled with a warmth and happiness inside them as Yuya smiles at them.


Japanese Translations (I'm not the best at this but I'll do my best!) pardon my incorrect spellings :-

Hai - Yes
Demo - But
Taku - Geesh
Honto - Really
Nane - What
Nande - Why
Soka - I see
Kawaii - Cute
Hedoi - Mean
Mate - Wait
Mataku - Seriously
Hayaku - Hurry up
Chibi - Liitle/Tiny/Small


Author's Notes: By the way readers I hope you can pardon the incorrect spellings of the Japanese words...It was very tempting so I just tried it...please forgive me..and please if I may selfishly ask for your time to review...thank you...


Author's Notes: Thank You for the reviews...I have made changes so that you will hopefully understand the story even more...thanks again your opinions and thoughts are appreciated...