This is my first fan-fiction. So PLEASE Review anything criticism or pointers welcome.
Also A HUGE thanks to my Beta Reader: SpyYoung! :-)
THIS IS THE DISCLAIMER: I DO NOT OWN NARUTO OR ANY OF IT'S CHARACTERS. I'M JUST USING THEM FOR A WEE WHILE. PLOT IS MINE HEHEHEHEHE
THIS IS A WARNING: THIS IS A BOYXBOY STORY DON'T LIKE DON'T READ! ALSO THE IS SWEARING AND LATER ON THERE MAY BE SITUATIONS WHICH ARE NOT FOR THE FAINT HEARTEN. AS WELL THIS DISCLAIMER AND WARNING APPLIES TO ALL CHAPTERS.
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It was a wet and windy evening in Konoha. The village streets were deserted like a ghost town, the only sound that could be heard was the rain bombarding the window shutters and roof tops.
Naruto was lying on his bed watching the rain drops hit his windows. A flash of lighting streaked across the sky with a mighty clap, and the light from the lighting lit up his face.
His eyes, they were big and blue as the ocean. He had whiskered lined cheeks, three on each side of his face. And he had the most unruly hair, spiky and blonde as the sun.
He lay there still, watching the rain and lighting illuminate the night sky.
"What should I do?" Naruto asked aloud to himself. "I know". The blonde rose up off his bed swung his legs around and got up. He made his way over to his apartment door, picking up his coat and putting on his boots.
He made his way down the flight of stairs in the building where he lived. All the while doing up the coat to his chin and stuffing his hands in his black and orange pockets. When he reached the bottom he stood in the door way for a while, watching the rain hit the ground. A small sigh passed his lips and began to walk out into the empty streets of Konoha.
On the other side of the village was the Inuzuka residence, where a certain heir to the Inuzuka clan; Kiba Inuzuka lived. He has rich brown animalistic eyes, hair wild as Naruto's but brown as milk chocolate, and on both sides of his face on each cheek there are two red fang tattoos. Kiba stared out of his bedroom window watching the rain attack the village. On the floor lying next to his bed was a dog the size of a small horse, with a coat as white and pure as the snow. Akamaru looked up at his master tilting his head wondering what his master was thinking about.
'Afr' "what's the matter"
"Nothing buddy, just watching the rain", replied the brunette. However Akamaru wasn't satisfied with is master's answer but he let it drop. He knows he will tell him when he was ready to. What Kiba wasn't telling Akamaru was he was thinking about someone who he has a soft spot for.
"Come on boy, let's go and get some training done".
'Woof woof' "Are you serious? It's cold, wet and horrible!" Wined Akamaru.
"You just don't want to go, because you want to stay in the warm house and have a nap?" Kiba said while shaking his head at his dog. Akamaru just looked at him and waged his tail.
"Fine, you stay here and I'll go and train." While Akamaru lay on the floor by the radiator, while Kiba got ready. He wore his high ankle training boots and his training jacket which had seen better days. The dog-nin started to make his way out of the front door when out of nowhere came a loud yell.
"KIBA, WHERE THE HELL DO YOU THINK YOUR GOING?" Shouted a very pissed looking Tsume. Kiba's mum.
She had the same colour hair, and tattoo's on each cheek as him. Tsume was the Matriarch of the Inuzuka clan seeing as Kiba's dad died a long time ago during a mission.
"I-I was going out to train." Kiba said to the women who can scare the crap out of anyone.
"In this weather?" she replied angrily while staring at her son. Kiba heard the anger in her voice. 'Crap! She getting pissed, also it's not helping when she's got that glare.'
"Well... I'm waiting Kiba." She said as her anger began rising to dangerous levels. 'God, what should I say?' "Yes I am." he replied. Unnoticed to him a massive cast iron frying pan came swinging to his head. DONG! The frying pan made contact with his head. "OUCH!" "What was that for!" Kiba loudly said while nursing his battered head. "That was the wrong answer! I know you didn't have much common sense but come on!" Tsume stated while staring straight at him with the frying pan in hand, just in-case he gave any more stupid answers. "But mum!" DONG! Another blow to his head. "OK, OK you win. I won't go out and train", winced the dog-nin, rubbing his newly attacked head. "Good", smiled Tsume. Kiba started back up the stairs back to his room. His mum continued to smile as she watched her son thump up the stairs with a strop on with two new lumps on his head thanks to her. "Hehehe that felt good", the matriarch thought, but she stopped when she noticed two dents in the pan where she whacked Kiba.
"I'll need a new one."
The rain started to ease off as Naruto walked through the village towards the park. He always loved walking in the rain, the way everything looked and smelt. To Naruto, when it rained everything was given a new lease of life. He continued in silence.
"What's on your mind Kit?" asked the voice from within. "Nothing Kyuubi" The blonde simply stated.
"I'm not stupid boy, I wasn't born yesterday. So what's the matter?" stated Kyuubi with annoyance in her tone. Naruto stayed silent while walking.
"If I have to force it out of you boy I will or so help me!" came the threat which he knew she will keep, unless he came out and told her. "Fine, I was thinking whether or not to ask Sakura out." the teen replied with a neutral tone.
"What? Are you serious?" shouted the stunned fox. "Yes. I just want to be happy in life for once." He said. "Why her? I thought you had a thing for that Kiba boy?" Naruto replied with a non-committal sound and annoyance in his voice. She continued. "Well every time he's around you go all jittery, and though you may be able to fool yourself but you are happier around him, than you are with that pink haired one." stated the fox with humour shown clearly in her voice. Her host remained silent for the rest of the journey.
The rain started to stop and a strong wind moved the clouds which hung over Konoha like a dead weight. As the clouds started to be broken up by the wind, a beautiful sun set was taking place. Naruto went to his favourite part of the park to watch the sun set. The sky showed its natural wonders of oranges, reds, pinks, yellows and blues. Animals started to make their way around the park as if nothing happened. And Naruto sat on his favourite bench which looked out onto the village below the horizon where the sun meets the earth. The wind travelled through the park carrying all the scents the park had to offer; the smell of the grass, flowers and the ancient trees. Everything was the way the whiskered boy liked it; peaceful and relaxing. A contented sigh passed is rose lips as he smiled a true smile. He felt at peace with everything.
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