Ok Sorry for this being so short but This is just a test chapter!
Feedback appreciated and well, have fun reading!
REALLY CANT BE STUFFED TO WRITE HIM FIXING HIS CAR!
Cp.1 - Crazy...
"Fuck!" I slammed my fist on my seriously tuned Mazda RX-8 models steering wheel as Thorn, one of the racers from the Forsworn sped past in his Bugatti Veyron slamming down on the nitrous.
He won...
I quickly drift over the finish line and get out of my car, "Dammit Thorn!" I shout, "You just had to hit the nitrous on that last lap didn't you?" We laugh.
"Well, Cya later Eragon!" He jumped into his car and sped off.
Crazy Bastard... I think to myself and get in my own car, I speed off and head home.
LATER
"What, Why!" I shout at my Father Garrow.
"Because, you could get yourself killed, now no more Racing, you can race but only legal ok!" I go to say something but shut my mouth and storm off into my room frustrated.
I look out into the night sky while lying on my bed, Fuck it...
I get up and open my window, jumping from the second story and rolling just as I hit the ground. Quickly I run into the garage and jump into my Nissan and speed out my garage door. I put my radio on and it starts playing Nightcore - Raised by Wolves.
I'll drive to my, well I don't know where, I'll just try to find somewhere.
I shut my eyes quickly and someone flashes in my mind, a girl, Raven black hair and Emerald eyes. I open my eyes again and I turn uncontrollably almost hitting a person, my car flips 20 feet into the air and all I am doing in holding onto the steering wheel and holding my breath bracing for it to hit the ground. Somehow on the entire mother earth I landed on my wheels breaking 2 of the tires.
"What the fuck just happened!?" I shouted in shock
I still held onto the steering wheel and my feet where both on the brake as I looked around, "Ok calm down, Calm down..."
I slowly got out of my car and looked at the damage, all 4 suspensions were fucked, two tires were not on the rims and it was just basically a wreak. I looked down the street and someone was coming, "Hey!" I waved my arms and jumped up and down. She pulled over and I asked nerviously, "Hey, you wouldn't happen to know where I can get a repair on this?"
She looked at the car, then me, then at the car again, "Yeah, sure just follow me"
She jumped on her Kawasaki Ninja 250R and took off, I was hot in pursuit even with a fucked up car. It only took us 5 minuets to get to where their hide out was, she was in the Blood Thirsty's. "Just in here!" She said with a voice like wind blowing through pines and the quiet whispers of snow on leaves.
"If you need anything just ask us!"
"Y...yeah sure..." Eragon had left the Hunters when the arrived there, but he knew it wouldn't be the end. "Wait, I never caught your name, mines Arya, yours?"
"Eragon" I may have been 22 but I was still nervous about talking to girls, the only girls I ever talked to was my cars, she left after that.
3 Hours Later
Eragon wasn't wearing a top or a singlet like he usually did but he dabbed his forehead with it to remove the sweat along it.
"Ok...No more for me..." I said tired, I had fixed the suspension, repainted it and put all new tires on the wheels. I turned around and I almost fell onto my car as I saw Arya sitting on a chair at the doorway. "Arya! Ahh...hi?" I was so embarrassed. "What, I like how you work on the cars."
"Ah, thanks...I guess?"
She laughed, her voice more clear than anything in the world. "What Eragon, scared of talking to girls?"
"No, well ok, maybe yes..." Eragon looked down as he put his singlet and top back on.
"Well, do you want anywhere to stay Eragon?" She asked, I was tempted to say yes but I didn't want to be too greedy, I was only a guest there.
"Ahh, no thanks, I'll just sleep in here." I patted my cars hood, "Nonsense, follow me!" She left and I followed. Little did I know that it would be HER room.
"Eragon, could you wait here?"She asked and ran into the room. "Sure"
"Ok, you can come in now!" she shouted, What on earth is she on about?
Too late, she was under the cover, "Arya, I..what are you doing?!"
"Well, come on get in!" I slowly made my way into her bed and stayed on the other side as far away from her as possible.
OK WELL, I haz changed it and that is not a lemon!
although I have no clue why I typed it _
