Summary: Hinata writes a story based on herself and her feelings towards Naruto and

what she wants them to be like. Then she gives it to Kiba for proof-reading, thinking he won't

see the personal plot. Kiba/Hina.

Disclaimer: If I owned Naruto I'd be rich... and I'm not T.T

"Hey Kiba-kun... w-would you mind doing s-something for me?" Hinata asked shyly.

It had taken her all morning to convince herself it would be okay to let some one else read

her story. She was so sure that who ever it was would only laugh at it, and she had put a lot of

effort into it. But Kiba was one of the closest friends she had, so he would probably be really nice

about it, even if it was rather silly. "Um... c-could you read through this for me?" She asked

holding out a pile of papers. She was blushing a little, though it wasn't exactly uncharacteristic of

her.

"Sure Hinata..." said Kiba. He took the papers from her. "I never knew you liked to

write..."

"Yes, w-well I'd like to b-become an author s-some day so... well... um..."

There were a lot of things nobody knew about her. She didn't like to tell people because

she was certain that people would only laugh at her. That was never a good feeling. But with

Kiba, she felt she could say anything. Well almost... she still hadn't told him about her huge

crush on Naruto-kun. As much as she wanted too, she supposed it would be the one thing she'd

never tell. She fidgeted nervously as Kiba started reading through the entire document. God,

Kiba read slow! She went through most of the story in her head. She remembered it pretty well,

probably because she thought about it a lot. But it could've been because of how long it took her

to write, and because of all the times she had to reread it looking for mistakes or checking back

on a certain scene to make sure it made sense with the one she was currently writing.

Hinata had chosen to write a sort of fairy tale, one about the handsome and witty prince

(Naruto) and the benevolent but shy princess (herself.) In fact, a lot of the story was based off

real people. Sakura was an ugly witch who cast an illusion to make herself look beautiful so the

prince would fall in love with her alone (Hinata didn't really think Sakura was an ugly witch but

regretfully it wouldn't have been a story if there hadn't been some kind of conflict, and, well,

Sakura just happened to fit the part.) Of course the king was based on her father, the princess had

a rather unusually cruel step-brother (though in she did mention in the story he was probably just

a little over sensitive and insecure) based off of her cousin Neji. Two of the most commonly

spoken knights in the story were based off of Kurenai-Sensei and Shino. She greatly admired

them, they were so strong she thought they definitely deserved the part. She went over the list of

characters in her head, she had thought of a character for almost all of her companions and their

teams... except for Kiba. For some reason nothing she could think of seemed to fit Kiba. She

wasn't sure why either. She was able to ponder this for several minutes before Kiba interrupted

her from her train of thought. "It's good Hinata but..."

Hinata could feel her face turning red again. "B-but what?" she asked just a little

disappointed. She was certain she had made some big mistake that would make Kiba hate her

story.

But that couldn't be, he was grinning. "It's missing something."

"Um..."

"The wild guy in the wilderness who is the REAL prince in the story."

Then Hinata knew he HAD figured out what her story was really about. She also knew

what he had meant by the 'wild guy.' Maybe she should give Kiba a chance... they were already

close, and face it, Naruto would never wake up and smell the roses. "I-I think you're r-right

Kiba-kun..."

"Yeah... hey I'll help you rewrite it if you want!"

"S-sure... w-we can go to my place..."

Me: Sorry if this is pathetic... I really like the pairing Kiba/Hina but I'm not the

best at writing them... if you tell me what I can do to improve I'll love you forever! (And

I'll give you a cookie.) Or you could just rate... (you'll still get a cookie.)