This is my first story have fun reading it and I really want to know what everyone thinks I do not own any of these characters or the game as they belong to Nintendo.
The Raging Relation
Chapter 1: Face to Face
As the last bulbin fell to the ground Link sighed in relief, he sheathed his master sword and began to search the bulbins for anything of use, after a few minutes of searching he found seven rupees, a quiver full of arrows, and a bomb.
As the bodies of the bulbins dissipated into darkness, the darkness didn't seem to disappear, but it converged in one place. Link being curious as always decided to check it out.
As he ran across the scorching desert sand, it felt as though something grabbed his ankle and pulled him to the ground with a hard "thump", Link looked up expecting to see the scorching desert sun gasped when he saw his dark self, Dark Link.
Link hurriedly jumped up and grabbed hold of the hilt of the master sword, just as he began to unsheathe it Dark Link looked at him with a blank terrifying stare and started wagging his finger back and forth.
Chapter 2: A Bloody Brotherhood
Link unsheathed his master sword and began to rush Dark link with a fierce hatred. Dark Link laughed a deep menacing laugh and pointed behind Link, Link turned around to see a cloud of darkness approaching him at a slow but menacing pace. With the cloud of darkness behind him and Dark Link in front of him, there was nowhere to run, Link felt like a mouse in a trapped between a wall and a cat.
Link looked around to see if there was anything of use, he then remembered the bomb he picked up off a dead bulbin, and then looked around for an unstable wall around Dark Link hoping to knock one down on him. There was only one wall and it wasn't very big still, Link tried anyway. He threw the bomb as hard as he could over Dark Link's head. As it missed Dark Link he began to laugh even harder at Link, Link grinned , and then there was a loud "Bang" in behind Dark Link, he stopped laughing when he heard a slight rumble and turned to see his demise...
Chapter 3: A Not So Peaceful Respite
As Link stared into the broken eyes of himself, he felt a slight sadness and was angry, not at Dark Link, but towards Ganondorf.
Link thought to himself "Ganondorf made him do this; he forced him towards his death". Link looked back down at his brother's corpse watching his blood pool among the grains of sand. Link looked up towards Ganondorf's Tower in a very fierce hatred.
I hope you like the story it's my first so give me all the "Helpful" words of advice you can because I am very interested in writing.