Chapter 1
I don't own Divergent, some of these words are hers paraphrased. Enjoy the story!
"Yes my dear girl, you did so well." I feel my mother's hand on my cheek, cradling it as I feel tears slowly falling down my face.
"What about Tobias? All my friends." I choke out a sob as I think about leaving him.
"They'll be fine. Right now, it's time to join your father and I." My eyes close, and I feel a thread pulling me into the light. This time, I give in.
"Beatrice, I've missed you sweetie." I'm utterly and completely speechless, I have no idea where I am. I've heard about heaven before, but I never really imagined it the way movies say it is: White gates, standing on a cloud, everything is perfect. And, it isn't like that. It's just very bright, but it does seem like a cloud. I see my parents, and past people I've loved.
"Tris! You made it." Will jokes. I hug him, apologizing for shooting him.
"Tris, don't worry. I forgive you. Now, I can watch over Christina, making sure nothing happens to her, make sure she's always safe. Uriah has been taking care of her, hasn't he?" I nod, suddenly crying thinking of Christina and Uriah, Uriah who is in a coma.
"Wait, you watch over her? Can I watch over Tobias?" I turn to my parents, who are watching Will and I. They nod as they walk over to me.
"Let's go for a walk, shall we? You've had a long day, you're in a new place. Want to go see what this place is about?" She grabs my hand and leads me towards a different place I don't know what to call.
"So, as you know you're in heaven. You were good, very selfless but also selfish. Heaven is a place good people go, as you know. Bad people do not go to hell, they don't go anywhere. They spend the afterlife in darkness, with nothing." I can understand that, and i'm glad there's no Hell.
"So, in Heaven you don't sleep or eat, I mean you can eat but you don't get hungry. You can leave Heaven and go to the afterlife, like where people who don't go to Heaven go. You could also come back from there. Oh, sweetie I think someone you know is here." I turn around to see Uriah, I guess he died from that coma.
"Oh Uri...i'm so sorry." I hug him, comforting him.
"Are Marlene and Lynn here?" As he says that, they come out. He runs to them, leaving me with my mother.
"As I was saying, you can also go to Earth. You can go and watch over your loved ones, protecting them. You can't save them from dying, but you can make sure they don't get hurt. We watched over you always. Caleb also, though I suspect he won't be coming here." She has tears in her eyes as she says that.
"So, I can to see Tobias?"
"Yes. It's not as easy as it sounds. You are almost like a ghost, you walk around with the person, you can whisper in their ear, telling them what to do. You can move them if need be, like if they're about to do something stupid. You get it, right?"
"Yes, I do. So, when can I go?"
"Well, now if you want. All you need to do is jump off the cloud and you're good to go. Will you be alright? You're automatically transported to where he is, and to get back all you have to do is say i'm ready. Ok? Do you want to take Uriah? He could go visit his mother and brother." I nod, and we get ready to go.
"Ok Tobias, here I come." I whisper, then Uriah and I fall off the cloud.
Hey! So, that was a new story I thought of last night. Did you like it? Tell me in the reviews. If you want me to do anything different, tell me that as well. I tried to make it seem realistic and not to fake and weird..did I do a good job? Sorry if I didn't. It was harder than it may seem! I'll have the next chapter up soon. Thanks and bye!
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