7'S TURN
welcome to my fanfiction, so this is my first fanfiction to please review and let me know in you reviews if you don't get anything I will happily explain. also please tell me what you think of my writing and if I am making an grammar mistakes.
chapter 1
I awake to the smell of bacon in air, and jump up with no problem to feel the cold damp floor. I think it must of rained and leaked through the sealing, and then I freeze to see neatly folded white dress shirt and black dress pants. I think to my self and remember its April 5th its reaping day, I get goose bumps and then all of a sudden I hear "Gino sweetie" my mother says happily to have what see has, and then soon after " what" my step brother gino says ignored at the thought of being bothered, " can you go wake up your broth" " No!, I am busy" gino says as he interrupts my poor loveable mother. This angers me why is he talking to her like that he should respect her for all the things she gives us, when she gets nothing. but then I hear " o I understand go finish what you are doing." my mother says nervously as she walks up the stapes to my room. This gets me even more angry.
"Alec wak" she stops to she me dressed up ready for breakfast. O how handsome turn around and let me see. "oooo I love those amber eyes you inherited from your father infect, YOUR THE SPITING INAGE OF HIM." my mother yells " O go hurry to the table I made eggs and bacon." she tells me. "Why do you let him talk to you like that?" I ask. "'O don't worry about him he just woke up on the wrong side of the bed you know him." my mother says. infect I do, ever since when his dad took us in stopping us from dyeing in the cold, then he proposed 3 years later and that man became my step dad, and the devil became my step brother. then I flash back to reality when I hear are old front door creek open and hear a belch and soon after "honey I am home" my step dad walks in or should I call him. "fat pig" I mumble to my self.
Me and my mother walk down the steps to greet the others. " look what the cat dragged in" my mother says to fat pig as she gives him a big fat kiss.
"Alec no offence but you look rerated." my ignorant brother says to me. "GINO!" my mother yells at Gino getting ready to dope slap him but she stops as fat pig says " honey Gino is just putting in his input. ISN'T THAT RIGHT MY BOY" Fat pig says as he pats is perfect son on the head. "RIGHT BACK AT YA" I say to feel a smack up the side of my head. " what was that for"? I ask questionly. " for being rude" fat pig says " o really cuz Gino wasn't rude fat pig" I yell, "WHATT!" Fat pig yells, " someone's going to reaping with a few new gashes" fat pig yells even louder. this intimidates me and I take a few steps back. "O you guys are going to be late for reaping" my mother says saving my from an uncertainly doom. " ya don't wont to be late for that lets go Gino bambino" I say as I rush towards the door. "That's ok cuz I will be hear when you come back." fat pig says trying to intimidate me even more but it doesn't match up to my fear of the reaping's