This isn't my first FanFiction, just one of the first on this website. Please tell me what you think! The first four reviews will get the honour of making and naming Bluefang's four kits, fur colour, eye colour, everything about them! Thanks for reading :3

Allegiances

ThunderClan (Only...)

Leader: Bramblestar - Brown tabby tom with black stripes and amber eyes.

Deputy: Brackenfur - Handsome pale ginger tom.

Medicine Cat: Starblaze - Cream she-cat with amber eyes. Tusslestrike's sister.

Warriors: Since you already know most of the warriors, I'll only list the new cats.

Tusslestrike - Handsome black and cream tom with green eyes.

Conkerclaw - Muscular brown tom with green eyes.

Tulipnose - Pretty ginger she-cat with pale gray stripes.

Fadingecho - Soft-spoken pale gray she-cat with alluring red eyes.

Stingclaw - Large black tom with gray eyes and very sharp claws.

Shadowstep - Ginger tom with black paws.

Iceclaw - Pretty ice white she-cat with strange purple-pink eyes. Tusslestrike's mother.

Apprentices:

Rubypaw - Brown tom with ginger stripes and a ginger patch around one of his pale green eyes.

Tabbypaw - Pretty tabby she-cat with blue eyes. Rubypaw's sister.

Wolfpaw - Bulky black, brown, and white tom with pale blue eyes.

Ringpaw - Ginger she-cat with gray rings on her tail.

Wirepaw - Gorgeous young brown she-cat with silver eyes.

Queens:

Pebblestorm - Gray and white she-cat with light blue eyes.

Frostblood - Beautiful pure white she-cat with amazing red eyes.

Bluefang - Blue-gray she-cat with green eyes. Expecting kits.

Kits:

Pebblestorm - Joltkit, Flarekit, Sandkit, Moonkit, and Vapourkit.

Frostblood - Wingkit, Pinkit, and Drumkit.

Prologue

Clan cats across the forest and beyond relished in the beautiful day that had been bestowed upon them. Birds soared through the air with grace and sincerity, their chirps happy and welcoming. Forest cats frolicked in the grass and flowers, and the cats of the water splashed in the ever cooling river that had flowed for what seemed to them like eternity. Almost every cat was out in this gorgeous weather StarClan had blessed them with, all except Pebblestorm, her mate, Tusslestrike, and the medicine cat, Starblaze. Jayfeather had joined them. Though he was now an elder, he had come to watch over Starblaze and her first experience of kitting since becoming a full medicine cat.
"Okay, Pebblestorm, it's over. You have five beautiful kits." Starblaze purred softly into Pebblestorm's ear. She sighed with relief. It was finally done. She had begun kitting at sunrise, and it was almost sunhigh, where the day was hottest. This had only brought more stress the the young warrior queen, as the humid tension in the air only made her kitting feel worse.
"Oh, Pebblestorm, they're beautiful, just like you." Tusslestrike muttered happily as he curled round his mate, proud. Pebblestorm purred weakly.
"Why don't you name them?" Jayfeather put in. Starblaze nodded with a warm smile. Everything and every cat seemed warm today.
Pebblestorm glanced down at her five kits, breathing in their homely kit scent and purring at their tiny squeaks and movement.
"How about Flarekit, Moonkit, and Sandkit?" Tusslestrike pointed to the first three kits, one a large ginger tom, the next a slender gray tabby she-kit with black stripes, and the last a gorgeous sand coloured she-kit. Pebblestorm purred even louder.
"They're wonderful names," She commented. "You can name the last two." Tusslestrike told her.
"Vapourkit for the gray and blue one." She pointed at the sleek tom. Her mate nodded in acceptance.
"Oh, look at him...he looks almost exactly like you." Starblaze breathed, staring at the last kit, who was trembling, his shoulders jolting wildly at the humid air.
"Joltkit, then." Pebblestorm rested her nose on each of her kits, then brought them closer to her belly so they could suckle.
"Welcome to ThunderClan, tiny warriors." Jayfeather blessed them. Pebblestorm lay her head down softly and panted in the heat. Suddenly, Tusslestrike gasped as he stood up to give his mate room. "Look! Joltkit has opened his eyes already." He softly placed his paw on the gray and white tom, who turned his tiny head to stare at Jayfeather with unusual alluring black eyes. A vision of them reached the blind elder.
Jayfeather flinched back at their power. "A cursed kit." He whispered, so softly that no other cat heard him. He left the nursey in a hurried terror. Starblaze followed after him, her departing words just reaching the two cats. "I'll leave you two to get to know them."
As she left, Frostblood and Bluefang took her place. They gasped in delight as they looked upon the gracious kits.
"They're simply amazing." Bluefang sighed, sitting down and glancing at her rounded belly. She would bear her own kits soon. A flicker of nerves and excitement lingered in her green eyes, the same shade of emerald as Tusslestrike's. Iceclaw, Tusslestrike's mother, was Bluefang's sister.
"They indeed are. And that gives these three new kits to play with. Well, in a moon or two." The beautiful white queen, Frostblood, whisked the three kits in with her tail, whose eyes were wide and joyous.
"Yay! New denmates!" Wingkit exclaimed.
"Not for another moon, silly. They aren't big enough." Pinkit flicked her brother's ear with her miniscule tail.
"Did we used to look like that?" Drumkit asked, somewhat amused at their tiny size. Freezeblood nodded at his question.
"At one time, yes. But not anymore. Now you're growing to be big, strong warriors." She praised her beauties, who beamed at her dumbed down praise. All except Pinkit, who rolled her eyes. "Not yet. We still have to wait four and a half moons before we can be proper apprentices."
"Oh, Pinkit, your time will come. Stop moaning. Every cat in the Clan had to wait just as long as you. As will these five." Frostblood laid her tail on each kit in turn.

Outside the nursery, Jayfeather was lurking in the shadows. His blind blue eyes glinted. The winds ruffled his gray fur, and the echoes of many ancient cats whispered, 'The end of all ends is nigh. Only a new rise of power can stop it..."

So, what do you think? Should I continue? I accept any constructive criticism, but please, nothing horrible. Help is always great. I'll love you if you review!

Brackencloud x