This is a redo of my intro story with my character Neia...
Chapter one: Crazy neon water
Going through the normal day: go to school, get home, be bored out of my mind after doing my homework, and maybe run around the house.
Later that night...
10:00 p.m., going through a random vhs movie and watching Austin Powers or Shrek. I'm maybe just tired so i'm just laying on my back. Well then, I hear a weird buzzing noise...
I quietly sneak outside, everybody is asleep. Now what? I'm in the park area right below my patio. Looking around I glance at the pond. It's not clearish-green... it's neon... blue?
I inspect closer and I hear meowing near my feet. My cat and my dog are right beside me. Chum... Kitty... Should I even touch the water?
Whatever... Whatever the water is going to do... I'm going to try touching the surface.
... BAD MOVE-BAD MOVE! The water immediatly goes insane! the water forms into something! But it grabbed me and two other things... MY PETS!
OH GREAT CAN'T BREATHE! CAN'T MOVE! NOTHING!
My cat and dog are going insane! What the heck is this thing?!
End chapter one
So Chum is my actual cat, he's black and white. He also have fluffy and has yellow eyes.
And Kitty is my nine to ten year old rodeisian veisala ridgeback. He has short orange hair and has dark brown eyes.
So... Review and the second chapter can come out as soon as possible!