I did this for a english thingo and I thought is sorta suited Esme, with the abusive husband when she was alive and all!! lol.

Dont own her!!!

I walk through the door.

The noisy click-clack of my shoes is all I hear,

I look in the mirror, my hair, my clothes all the way he wanted them.

I can't even see me.

The door bursts open,

My husband, home from work.

He's had a bad day, it's written plainly on his face.

I knew what he was going to do.

He advanced, I stepped back.

Unable to stop what was coming.

First he shouted, his words hurt more than any blow.

He raised his fist, and hit.

I fell to the floor.

He struck again and again.

By the time he was done I was lying, barely conscious, in a pool of blood.

Everything went black.


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