Crappy writing, too many chapters, what's not to like?
Chapter One
You stand on the edge of the platform as cotton candy invades your senses. Gripping your sword tightly, finding the familiar cherry-on-marshmallow scent only so comforting, you close your sightless eyes in a vain attempt to block out reality.
Vriska is dead.
Her body lies before you, her face is that of shock and…maybe even betrayal. Of course, you literally just stabbed her in the back. Who wouldn't feel that way?
For sweeps you are taking in the dreaded smell of her blood, trying not to bury your head in your hands and cry. What would Karkat do if he found you like that?
…What will he do when he finds that you just killed the only god tier member your group had left?
"Terezi…?"
Shit.
You refuse to turn around and face him. You just can't. His footsteps, slow and careful, echo in the darkness. He's nearing you, and a gasp indicates he's seen Vriska.
"Terezi…what the fuck did you do?"
Still trying to ignore him, you cross your arms and find that there is blood smeared on your sleeve. A single tear threatens to leak out of your eye.
Karkat approaches the body and-
You startle awake from yet another goddamn Homestuck dream. You aren't on a meteor going between dimensions, you're on an airplane going from Canada to England. It sure feels like you've been on it for sweeps, though. Not even halfway there your phone ran out of battery (You were using it to write Homestuck fanfictions) and you realized that eating thirty-something bags of peanuts was probably really bad for your health. Oh, darn.
Looking to your left and right, relieved you can see again, you observe that, despite your original thoughts, (and how did you miss this?!) there is no one else on the plane. Well, there were people. Where'd they go?
Whump.
You grab the armrests and squeak a bit as you suddenly drop out of the air by about...say, 413 feet? Oh, jeez, again with the references.
The wind squeals over the wings. Something is most definitely wrong here. What in the name of Lord English are the pilots doing?
Do you...
A. Go investigate or
B. Remain seated and hope things settle back down?
If you chose A, proceed to Chapter Two.
If you chose B, skip to Chapter Three.
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