this is my amaxzing neqw story and he sooo baddas. im so prood off my worc.
chapter onr
i was in the middle of the town and i was attacked in an dark allyway by some drnkards who wanted some money out of a thre year old. then as they started to beat me up i heard a voice "Kit...". i looked up to have my faced kicked by a drnkard. "Kit...do you wnt power?" i yelled out yes as a reply to asave my self from the drunkards. then the pain passed and my thre yewar old body began to glow and i saw red all over my skin. behind me was a tail of red and i hear a voice again "Kit I will give you my power cause im a super cool dude and stuff." i then saw a giant fox raising his thumb up and a smile on his face as in apreciaction. then power began to flow through me and i stood uop tp fight. i rushed that the drknards and punched them with one punch. when they fell with a thud i fell down "wow that was a toufh battle i need to rest now..."
years later...
i walk into the acadamy and i see the people who would become my underlings. i picked a seat next to a girl and winked at her the first to become a part of my group. WHAT THE! WHAT ARE YOU DOING YOUR IN THE WAY OF MY PRESCOIUS SAKUKE! "dude your way too loud. you dont need to shout." YOUR PRECIOUS SAKUK!NO HES MINE said a girl with long blond hair. then the instrctor came in and told us tpo perform a jutsu any one admn a goal we hope to achieve. i jumped over everyone and the teacher looked surpriused "I will become hokage and all of you will become m,y underlings or a aprtr of my group of women!" evreyone started laughijg but stoped when i transformed ninto the form the fox gavbe me. then they all came down from their seats and either bowed down or sat nextr to me to please me. like a real baddas. exept two the girl who i sat next to and a guy near her with black hair. please someone like you wont be able to stand up to the mighty sasuke the boy with black hair said. then the girl next to him started to faint being next to him SASUKE. i thought it was odd that she needed yo yell since she was right nextr to him.
hours later...
the blond gurl named ino started to cling to me which i dont mind started talking about love and random stuff but i dont care about that adn i told her to sho when i meat with my teaml. i saw the girl who shouts to loud and sasuke here "why are you two doing here this is team sevens meatijg point. not the losers point." i laughed at my funny joke. then our leader appeared before us in a puf of ssmoke. now lets get started yoiu guys nedd to grab these bells from me by sundown. i thoiugh eassy so i turned into my powqerful form and rushed at him and then he was shoved down. hes probably thinking about how scary i am even though im twelve. then the man dissapeared and i heard A THOUSSAND YEARS OF DEATH! and i felt somethung very hard up my but and i fainted.
cant wait for tthe next chapterr.