A/N: This a rewrite of Taking The Rich Girls. I've changed parts of the story. So it's a little different from the original.

Also. I do not own anything but my OCS and plot.

Saturday
9:00pm

Fabian's POV

"Fabian!" I heard a deep voice.

That must be my "Dad". Oh right, I'm Fabian and I'm a criminal as people say. I steal, kill, or anything related to that.

I have raven hair and have blue eyes. I'm about 6'0 and have a six-pack. I like to read and play guitar. I also have four brothers; I'm the third oldest though. There's the oldest, Eddie. He has dirty-blonde hair and brown eyes. He's about 6'1 and has a six-pack like me. He can be very bossy at times, but is caring and gives me advice most of the time. Next, the second oldest, Jerome. He also has dirty-blonde hair, but has blue eyes. He is 6'2 and has a six-pack also. He's a prankster and joker of this family. Then there's my younger brother, Mick. He has blonde hair and blue eyes. He is 6'0 and also has a six-pack. He's interested in sports or anything involved with sports and eats a lot. Then finally is our little brother, Alfie. He has brown hair and eyes. He is 6'0 and like my brothers and I, has a six-pack.

Then, there's our cousins; Ben, James, and Gabriel. The oldest is Ben, he has dirty-blonde hair and brown eyes. He is 6'1 and like all of us, has a six-pack. He is very humble; especially to Eddie. Second oldest, James. He has brown hair and green eyes. He's 6'0 and six-pack too. Then finally Gabriel, he has black hair and has brown eyes. He is 5'11 and like what I mentioned for like six times, a six-pack.

We are all sixteen...Oh wait! I forgot the youngest cousin by one year is Dexter. He has auburn hair and brown eyes. He has a four-pack and is 5'10. He is very piggy when it comes to eating like Mick, Eddie, Alfie, and James. I wonder how I live with these eight guys.

"Yes, Dad?" I shouted.

"Come here," he demanded serious as I sighed heavily.

I walked into the master room. The master room is where my dads works so its more like an office, but he actually sleeps in his here. On the left is my dad's king-size bed with black and red covers. He also has three chests filled with the stuff we've stolen and a drawer filled with his clothes. In the middle, that's where my dad's desk is with three office chairs surrounding it. And on the left is two doors, one door to his master bathroom and the other one, no idea!

I saw my brothers and cousins on office chairs (which I just mentioned) and realized this must be another "mission". We had all sorts of missions from killing to stealing. Suddenly, I think of all those memories and smiled. I remember the day we started stealing.

"Father!" my 5-year old self called.

"Yes!" he asked.

"Why did you call me here?" I asked, looking at my brothers and cousins.

"I have a mission for you," he responded, giving me a piece of paper.

"I wonder what it is?" I thought. I scanned through the paragraph and noticed the words 'little', 'gemstone', and 'steal'. It was a plan to stealing a gemstone from this certain jewelry store, reading the paragraph over.

"It's a plan to steal a gemstone and I need you guys to get it!" my father demanded. "Remember, if you don't complete this, I will not feed or care for you guys for a month."

"Yes Father/Uncle," we all replied. I had to do this, I really didn't want to lose my privilege of eating and sleeping and I can tell the others didn't want to either.

"Good now start the mission!" he pointed to the door. We all headed out the door and that was the start of our adventure.

I smile at those thoughts.

"Hi sons and nephews," my 'Dad' greeted, interrupting my thoughts.

"What is it you want?" Eddie asked. Our 'Dad' smirked evilly. I kinda got freaked out. He never does that unless this is another killing mission. I totally hate do that but I have to eat, besides last time Jerome didn't behave so well, he was hit very hard. I breathed my breath in when he was about to say something else.

"I want all of you to kidnapped these girls!" he explained and handed us folders. I let my breath out. "They are all from the rich's family in the entire world."

"Alright," We all said in unison and took the files.

"I expect these girls to be here by dawn or at least by morning." my 'Dad' demanded.

"Yes sir." we said in unison again.

"Now you may leave," he shouted. We all bowed to our Dad and walked, in a straight line, out of the room and into the living room. I sat on a single-seat and I opened my file, only to see a picture of a dirty-blonde haired girl. I looked at the the top of the folder and it said, "Nina Frobisher-Smythe." (A/N: I changed it because I thought it would be better for her to be related to Sarah). I looked at the information on this folder.

Full Name: Nina Martina Frobisher-Smythe
Height: 5'5
Favorite Color: Red
Birthday: July 7
Interests: Egyptian Things, Egypt, Americans, her sisters.
Bio: Nina and KT are real sisters out of their British family. The reason why they are not British is because Natasha (the mom) was raped under her will when she was 18, making her have these kids—which she loves dearly. Two years later, Natasha married Eric Frobisher (A/N: Eddie and Eric aren't related at all!). Thust, making her family with British.

"Hey Fabian, who did you get?" Eddie asked me.

"Nina Frobisher-Smythe," I answered. He smirked.

"I have Patricia Frobisher-Smythe," Eddie said. He turned to our brothers. "Who did you guys get?"

"I have Amber Frobisher-Smythe," Alfie claimed.

"I have Mara Frobisher-Smythe," Jerome called

"I have Joy Frobisher-Smythe," Mick said.

"I got some girl named Piper," Ben stated, not caring. Eddie and my cousins rolled their eyes. Knowing Ben, he would finish this in a flash. "Hey Gabriel, James, what ya got?"

"I got KT/Willow," they both said at the same time. Ben chuckled; he always does that because of how Gabriel and James are like twins.

"And you, lil' Dex?" Ben asked 15-year old.

Dexter pouted, "I told you not to call me that."

"Why not, you ARE the youngest, so its normal to call you little," Ben retorted, emphasizing "are".

Dexter sighed and let what Ben said go. "Erin is her name."

"Wow these are really rich girls!" I exclaimed. It is true, Frobishers are very rich and high-class.

"Well let's get to the kidnapping now," Jerome said excited. The boys all smirked and got dressed into black. We met in garage, going inside a van. Alfie, Dexter, and Ben went in one van; Mick, James, and Jerome went into another; and Gabriel, Eddie, and I went into the last one. Eddie got to drive because he was older, I got shot-gun, and Gabriel got the back, poor him!

It took us a while but we all made it to the mansion and it was very huge; and when I mean by huge, I really meant it. It was also multicolored; white to silver to yellow to gold to light pink to hot pink to red to orange to blue to green to purple to black. There was some fence around the mansion, so we deactivated the security. We all went to hot pink area because pink is where you find girls the most. We found some huge window in that area that showed us some hot pink room. We slightly stick our heads at the glass so we could see.

"AMBER! DID YOU TAKE MY PHONE AGAIN!" The voice shouted at blonde as the voice walked into the room. Alfie smirked; I guess he found his target, Amber. I took notice of how she looked. Amber has blonde wavy hair and blue/grey eyes.

"No, Patricia. I didn't," Amber bluntly replied. "Why would I take some ugly phone?" she muttered. I looked at Patricia, she's Eddie's target. She has red hair and blue-green eyes.

"WHAT WAS THAT?" Patricia seethed. Amber whimpered. Then five voices came into the room fighting about... clothing!? They were also holding dresses.(Dresses on Profile).

"Mara, Nina, Willow, and Piper, I told you guys a blue dress is better!" some brunette said, putting some blue dress in their faces as the five girls made their way into the room.

"No way; red is better, Joy, and you know it," a dirty-blonde said sassy. I look at the dirty-blonde, that's my target.

Mick, Jerome, James, Ben, and I smirked; we now have our targets. Let me describe my brother's targets. Joy, aka Mick's target, she has brown hair and eyes. Mara, Jerome's target, has also brown hair and brown eyes. Next is Willow, James' target. Willow has red hair with blonde highlights and hazel eyes. Last is Piper, Ben's target, she has brown hair with red highlights and blue-green eyes. Wow, she looks a lot like Patricia.

"No way," Piper said. "Silver is better."

"No, GREEN!" Mara spat out, holding her dress high.

"No, yellow...Squeak." Willow exclaimed. "Yellow means happiness. Squeee..."

"No, red."

"No, blue."

"No, silver."

"No, green."

"No, yellow, squeak."

We looked back at Amber and Patricia. Patricia noticed something on Amber's pink desk and went over there and snatched it. Amber tried to take it back.

"Give that back, Trix!" Amber said, trying to get it back.

"NO, this is my phone!" Patricia bitterly snapped. "WHY THE HELL—"

"SHUT UP!" someone shouted. We all (A/N: that includes the girls) looked at the two new figures in the room.

"Hey, Erin, KT." Nina said as if nothing happened. Yay, we finally found our last two targets. There is KT, Gabriel's target. She has brown eyes and brown curly hair. Then there's Erin, Dexter's target, she has brown eyes and black hair

"What are you guys fighting about?" KT asked.

"We were fighting about the ballroom dresses again," Nina, Mara, Piper, Willow, and Joy confessed. Then, KT and Erin had a relaxed face on.

"Few, I thought only Erin and I were the ones wanting to change the stupid dresses." KT said. "Now what about Amber and Patricia?"

"Phone misunderstandings again," Nina explained. KT let out a sigh, "You know, once Patricia and Amber start on the phone argument, nothing can stop them."

"Well, next time keep it down; Sophia and Cassie are already asleep." Erin said. The girls nodded, and the guys and I chuckled. "We better get to bed too. It's about eleven and we have ballroom dancing tomorrow." Patricia groaned and the others squeaked. They all replied okay and said their good nights. Amber just went into her hot pink queen sized bed with black and white butterflies covers on it.

I thought of a great plan and smirked. "Hey guys, lets take the girl in their sleep." Eddie's eyes brightened.

"Great idea, Fabian," he said and we high-fived. The others agree and we all head to different colored areas of the house except Alfie. I went to red, Jerome went to Green, Mick went to blue, Eddie went to purple, Ben went to silver, James went yellow, Gabriel went to gold, and Dexter went to white.

Third Person POV

~Fabian & Nina~

He sneaked in and crept in quietly. Nina was snoring on the bed, listening to some music. Fabian carefully took out the earplugs and she growled in her sleep. "Get away from my music." He stopped and decided to leave the music on. He put some sleeping gas on her; even though she's already asleep. He put some duct tape on her mouth and handcuffed her hand behind her back. He put her and a few of her things in a big brown sack and came out the window.

~Eddie & Patricia~

Eddie quietly came in and saw his little target, Patricia. She had her music loud from her Ipod, while it was charging. Eddie quietly tip-toed to her bed and put some sleeping gas on her, making her not move at all. He took some her clothes and her phone and charger, putting them in a bag—also Patricia—and walked out the window to see Fabian.

~Alfie & Amber~

Lucky for Alfie, his target was the easiest to deal with right now. The fact that she was already asleep, but one for sure was that he had to do is get her clothes and a few things. He got everything, but he blushed at Amber's underwear and bras. (A/N: Yeah I'm being pervy mood right now. Hehe!) He carried her bridal style with her stuff on her stomach and walked out the window.

~Jerome & Mara~

Jerome frowned at what he saw, Mara was wide awake reading some book. Jerome frowned again at his target. Isn't she supposed to be asleep. Jerome then thought of the sleeping spray his brother, Fabian, made. Hmm, for once the nerd in useful. Jerome quickly sprayed the stuff into Mara's room—without her knowing—and Mara fainted. Jerome smirked and he made his way into Mara's room, getting her and Mara's stuff. He quickly went back out the window and saw his brothers, Fabian, Eddie, and Alfie already there.

~Mick & Joy~

Mick didn't bother trying to open his door, it was already unlocked. Although, like Jerome's problem, Joy was awake, but she was playing Candy Crush. Mick smirked at what she was playing and he quickly threw a candy into her bedroom, so he could get her attention. Joy, on the other hand, was wondering what why a candy came out her window outside. She raised an eyebrow and walked to her window, only to be capture by Mick. Mick smirked and put on sleeping gas on her. He smirked once more and put her in a sack, but made sure to bring some of her clothes and her phone.

~Ben & Piper~

Ben, as in Fabian's POV earlier, would usually finish this in flash. Well, he quickly got Piper before all his brothers and cousins, but he didn't know what to bring because he isn't well on choosing things. He took about a lot of time, more like ten minutes, and got out the window before anyone else.

~James & Willow~

James walked through Willow's balcony door instead of taking the window since he was too lazy to. James' eyes widened at all the flowers (in pots of course) growing in her yellow bedroom; from black irises to yellow sunflowers, there were tons of flowers. Although in Willow's room, it was only one flower of each kind. James smirked and found the squeak girl. She was sleeping on a "flower" bed. He quickly put her on his back and saw some of her clothes and phone on her nightstand. He checked the place for anything else and took her out of the room.

~Gabriel & KT~

Gabriel slipped into the window and saw KT sleeping peacefully and angelically. Gabriel tip-toed over to KT's bed and was about to get her, but someone suddenly knocked on the door.

"KT, are you asleep, honey?" A man asked, knocking on the door. Gabriel immediately went under KT's bed and made sure to be quiet. The man—who was Kt's father—came in and saw KT sleeping perfectly. KT's father kissed her forehead and went to the light pink room, closing the door on the way.

"Oh yes, he's gone." Gabriel sighed and picked up KT and took some of her clothes and "things". Gabriel checked if anyone was there and climbed out the window.

~Dexter & Erin~

Dexter climbed through the glass window and made sure to get Erin without getting himself distracted. The only thing that got him distracted is the PSP on her wooden nightstand. I thought only guys own and play on a PSP . Dexter decided to "borrow" the PSP. He then got Erin and put some duck tape on her. He took her and some of her things along with.

~All brothers and cousins~

All the brothers (Fabian, Eddie, Jerome, Alfie, Mick) and cousins (Ben, Dexter, Gabriel, James) all met up with their targets.

"Did you guys get you're targets?" Jerome asked. His brothers and cousins all nodded. "Okay, let's go back."

The boys brought the girls to their "home" and laid them on their own bedrooms since they didn't know where to put them.

So I hope you like it. It's my first remake of my first crime story. Review to know what happens after. Must REVIEW!

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